42nd street

[beatnikbiker]

thanks again to all the friends on here for really helping me to understand the process of recording, im getting my head round it now, these are all 1st takes not perfect but good enough, for a song idea i had a while back, knocked this mix out and got it online in a couple of hours today, a special thanks to 64 guitars for your help. john

[SwanSong]

hi there. wonderful original piece of music. nice beat
good vocal.s and guitar work. recording was done
very well also . good production2 thumbs up Neil.!

[Kenny B]

Nice tune ... like the way it flows ... great playing and singing!!!

kb

[Redler]

Agree with the others above, great singing and playing! Nice riffs on the lead guitar! Well produced as well!

[Hilary]

Hi there John - there's a great 60s feel to your music. Can you post the lyrics, I had trouble making some of them out (and I'm British) - nicking? paperclips and hiding foreign objects up your sleeve?

I think it's crying out for some harmonies, particularly on the chorus.

Well done on the production, you sure have picked it up quickly and all done in one take, crikey . . .

[Ferryman]

Good work, this rocks along nicely. Vocals sound great, well sung and well recorded, although I agree that some harmonies on the chorus would be great, especially the bit where you go "oooh". Nice playing all round.

My only suggestion would be to bring the little lead licks at the end of the vocal lines up. They are getting lost for me and they add a lot of interest to the song. The main solo at 2:40 ish works well and is at the right level, you can hear it nicely.

Cheers,

Nigel

[beatnikbiker]

thanks to all for positive comments, Hilary feel free to add backing vox, i think a womans voice would enhance it better than a mans.

[Hilary]

Ok here it is 

[beatnikbiker]

good work Hilary.

[Mike_S]

Lovely harmonies guys, and a solid track. Yes does have a 60's feel to it refreshing to hear in this day and age of over production.