The Date For Our Life

Started by Pharoah246, November 10, 2013, 05:22:22 PM

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bruno

Nice song - and very nice vocals. One minor comment I'd would say is that this is a 6/8 piece, and you are pulling the timing around quite a bit  - that may be as intended. It may be just me, but I'd say less sway would give the song a better pace - but you have to experiment with these things. Cool track.
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Pharoah246

Quote from: bruno on November 11, 2013, 04:13:51 PMNice song - and very nice vocals. One minor comment I'd would say is that this is a 6/8 piece, and you are pulling the timing around quite a bit  - that may be as intended. It may be just me, but I'd say less sway would give the song a better pace - but you have to experiment with these things. Cool track.
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I didn't record this to a metronome. It was all done in one take with one mic so naturally I lost myself in the music I guess. :-\
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T.C. Elliott

I like the guitar quite a bit and then your vox came in and I liked it, too. I really enjoyed listening. I didn't notice the timing so much but I was sitting back enjoying it instead of actively listening as I usually do. It's easy to get lost in there.
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