"Don't" a Hook original

[Hook]

A few weeks ago I made three drum tracks one afternoon, one became "I was There" for Bassfest & another brcame my last post "Mix Master". This was written to the 3rd drum track, I used Drumjam for this track. I wrote the tune using smart keys from garageband (rock organ), then I added the ukes, bass, vocals and saxaphone (thumbjam) over the last week or so. Finished it up today.

1- drum track (DJ)
1- rock organ (GB)
1- chorusy rhythm uke
1- distorted tremolo uke
1- bass (real bass this time)
1- 1 schizophrenic tenor sax solo (TJ)
1- lead vocal
2

Don't

written & performed by Hook

background vocals

I don't always know my way
I don't ever know the right things to say
I don't want to start another fight
I don't know how to make things right

You don't, you don't, you don't
Understand me
I don't, I don't, I don't
Know how to make you see

I don't know how to let it go
I don't know how not to let my feelings show

Chorus
We, where is the we
Seems so separate, individual
You then me

I don't want to play these games
I don't want to feel guilt, don't want to feel shame
I don't want to be alone
I don't want this to be just a house it needs to be a home

Chorus
I don't want to see you cry
I don't want to look back and say that we never tried

[kenny mac]

Wowwww Hook your on fire lately.
This is a great tune and storyline.
The music is fabulous and it's going straight into my pIe pod  .  Well done sir,keep them coming.

[SwanSong]

Another superb Hook Original. well executed. a great production
and fine singing. 2 thumbs up from me and hats off ...Neil.!

[Redler]

You've written superb music!!! Each thing is in balance perfectly! Enjoyable listening!

[Geir]

You're a songwriting machine my friend ! This is yet another fabulous song! You really are a talented guy. Fantastic production as well. You really know how to use your instruments to make a great arrangement.

Love it

[Speed Demon]

Hook, you monster! A red-hot song! (insert many superlatives here).

Awesome workmanship on instruments and vocal.

Ready for radio.

Well done! 

[bruno]

Wow, this is good bro. Serious hooks in this song, great vocal performance - funky but quite laid back jazz at the same time.
Excellent. Keep pushing that bar higher bro :-)
B

[phantasm777]

nice job hookster! this seems a lot different than a lot of stuff I've heard you do!

[Greeny]

Lots of cool flavours in this... latin, jazz, disco, and soul. They all add up to a great listen. Really nicely done, and the arrangement / mixing is spot on. Fine work!

[Jarle]

Wow, another fantastic song. Well written, performed and arranged.