City Of Life

[Tramway]

New song about my home town of Rotorua, New Zealand.  Hence the references to volcanic activity and tourism.

Tramway

[Jim1970]

Welcome to the Forum!
Im Digging your song
The Drums are arranged perfectly. I am Still learning how to put all the Drum Parts together and Have them recorded to the song.
Looking Forward to more tunes by you. Your from New Zealand thats so cool. I'm from New Jersey.

JIM

[mr2kewl]

welcome to the site!!

i totally agree with jim. this is a very well crafted song and a first post.

 
markr

[Bluesberry]

well constructed song.  Nicely done.

[Wiley]

You have done an excellent job with the drums.  I still haven't got them mastered.  I like your deep voice also.  Keep up the good work.

[BossMicroBRew]

Welcome aboard. I agree too...well put together. I still fiddle with the drums...you seems to have it figured out perfect. Personal connection always adds flair to a song. Good work.

[Greeny]

This is perfectly constructed. You sure have mastered the drums... the intro, lead-in and gradual progression towards the start of the vocal is spot on. Nice songwriting too. Has a kind of Dire Straits feel, although your vocals are quite like Lloyd Cole. Nice one. And welcome!

[Ferryman]

I really like this, great song, nice groove. As a Split Enz and Crowded House fan, it's nice to see someone from NZ on here. Your production is also very good. I like the vocal sound - how did you do that? Straight into the BR?

Cheers,

Nigel

[godinqc]

Yes very well constrcuted .. good playing and singing .. very good

[tafka]

great song.well played & sung.
i can hear Dire Straits too.

Tony J.