I Dream You (Naked Version) - AndyR Original

Started by AndyR, October 29, 2012, 01:57:22 PM

Farrell Jackson

This is fantastic Andy! Your pipes really don't need any more backing but I can certainly can hear some orchestration going in as enhancements to this wonderful piece of writing. I haven't heard this melody before but it would fit itself well within a dark musical. I'm envious that this came to you out of nowhere because it's an absolute stunning bit of creativeness!

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

Gnasty



Stunning is right! Amazing emotion! Yeah i hear orchestra fitting in too but as naked as it can be i like it as is.

Nice one (once again!! :D) Andy!
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stoman

It does have some similarity with a song I know (but can't quite put the finger on it), but there is still more than enough originality to it.

I don't know if this song can bear a big orchestration, as fragile as it is. IMO it sounds pretty much complete. I even think it should be just vocals and an acoustic guitar - or piano, and nothing more.

I would not use that much saturation and compression - this is a very gentle, heartfelt song that needs to breathe.

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  Steffen

henwrench

Just a great song.

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OsCKilO

Say it like it is Andy!

This is stunning and keeps you interested till the end!
Bravo!
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Hi Andy, another gem, but I know what you mean about sounding familiar, I often think that my stuff sounds like a hundred others. To me it sounds a bit like "Tuppence a Bag" from Mary Poppins but I am deeply in love with Julie Andrews so that might have coloured my imagination  ;D . Seriously, a top notch post............Willie
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Ooo! I was deeply in love with Julie Andrews for a very long time...

... that might be it!! (or something from Mary Poppins, anyway)
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olafgoesraawr

Nice song; the lyrics are beautifully crafted and very sincere.

From the musical perspective - the guitar playing is near flawless and the recording quality is crisp.

Keep it up dude, and if you could take a minute to check out some of my songs, it'd be smashing :)
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