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[vincent]

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[T.C. Elliott]

Looks good to me, and unless the song is a fairly quick tempo, I don't see a need for another verse. But a lot depends on the music. A fast tempo rocker can get away with more verses than a ballad can unless you manage to keep it interesting. A structure that may work here may night work elsewhere. My only advice is, if it feels right then go with it.