Let it out.. and if 'I' can't 'you' can!.....

Started by Daniel Storey, August 09, 2012, 04:24:23 PM

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Daniel Storey

August 09, 2012, 04:24:23 PM
I am by no means a great lyricist, but i have improved alot recently and ONE little thing really did it for me.

Alot of songs go I.... I..... I.... I....

my biggest tip is to instead go.... You... You... You... I...

As in you are talking about yourself when you say 'you'....


"You always think you are right but you know you're not
You never gave anything all you've got
You're lost in the past with a lonely dream
I'm gonna change this rotten theme"

^rubbish lines but hope it helps if you get stuck... :)

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henwrench

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August 09, 2012, 05:34:27 PM
There ya go. He spilled the beans. Every last one of 'em.... :D

                                                  hewrench

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DannyB_KY

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September 01, 2012, 01:00:41 AM
You see
You see
You see
I sure do!




Kewl tip!
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phantasm777

#3
September 01, 2012, 10:39:18 AM
i dont think it really matters, its the story and the cadence that are very important

Rata-tat-tat

#4
September 03, 2012, 02:48:16 PM
Dont Roosters eat beans???

Quote from: henwrench on August 09, 2012, 05:34:27 PMThere ya go. He spilled the beans. Every last one of 'em.... :D

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