Goodbye v1 - Andy casson

[andy casson]

Been playing with a riff for a few days, some lyrics came yesterday afternoon in the sun. It started as a picked accoustic, but have gone with more of a driving bass feel in the end and upped the tempo, limited guitar is bluesy. Looking for some ideas and feedback about the arrangement
Thanks 

Lyrics:
Chorus
All I want is the truth, all I want from you
All I want is the truth...is this our last goodbye

Verse
We're so tired of this talking
Have the words run out?
Passing days and I'm falling...without a doubt
Through this pain I am calling you
But I make no sound
In this night I am calling you
Can you hear me out?

[Hook]

Hey man did you ever do more with this. I like it and it seems pretty actualized, the only thing that I thought might help would be a bigger drum pattern at the chorus to give some power behind your hook which is really good. This should end up being a really solid song!
Rock on!

[SwanSong]

HI ANdy another..fine treat from u always enjoy
your music. good beat good vox good everything
cheers NEIL.!

[andy casson]

thanks guys, seems like ages ago, Hook I did look at this one again, see https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=12483.msg165001#msg165001 for v3, bit faster and more definite vocal/melody. Still think I would like to look at it again in the future.
cheers
Andy