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Title: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gary F on January 26, 2010, 10:29:41 AM
  Here's one that I wrote for my wife. Everything was done in the MBR.             
                 
                Thanks for listening ! 
       
                      Gary               







                                                               
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Tony W on January 26, 2010, 11:10:51 AM
Gary, this is a really cool tune. Great performance, great vocals. Congrats on a damn good song.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: SE on January 26, 2010, 12:55:31 PM
Hey what a nice tune, sure your wife loved it. Maybe the vox could be a little higher in the mix, well done.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Wiley on January 26, 2010, 08:00:23 PM
This is one of the most heartfelt originals I have heard in a long time!!!  You actually made me cry!! the vocals could have been up a little.  Was hard to heard with TV blaring in the other rooms.  My ears are ringing.  I will listen again tomorrow in the quiet.  Again was so ..... got to get a tissue,
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: pjd1 on January 27, 2010, 02:18:49 AM
Hope your,e misses liked you composition , youve told the world now!!! Great song !!!

PJD1
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gary F on January 27, 2010, 06:52:29 AM
   Thank you all for your comments !!!  And my wife does love this song                         
                    THANKS again listening !!!
                   
                     Gary
     
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: launched on January 27, 2010, 08:31:54 AM
Very good songwriting and playing/singing.

Peace,

Mark
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gary F on January 28, 2010, 07:30:05 AM
 Thanks Mark for the kind words.And thank you for listening.
                   
            Gary         
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gritter on January 28, 2010, 11:37:33 AM
Really great love song...so nice to hear. Well sung with passion and with a voice like that the vocals should be louder in the mix.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: OsCKilO on February 27, 2010, 04:37:00 PM
Stunning!!!!!!!


Dont Know How I Missed this!!



Your Vocal Is Superb!!!

Passion in Performence!!!!!  Can't Fake it Bro!   You Got it All!
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gary F on February 28, 2010, 10:28:19 AM
 Thanks Gritter and T !!! I really appreciate the comments.
                     Thanks for listening !!
                              Gary
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: SwanSong on February 28, 2010, 10:33:48 AM
HI GARY
WOW what a nice song and so thought ful . re dedicate to your wife.really nice song
enjoyed your singing and music.. great job.  thumbs up from me take care NEIL
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Rickocaster on February 28, 2010, 10:22:32 PM
Great song.  The music fits so well with the vocals.  Really communicates your feelings very effectively. I like that little guitar riff that repeats throughout the song -  pulls it all together quite well.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: IanR on March 03, 2010, 03:29:10 AM
This is really good stuff.  I really liked the guitar melody
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Geir on March 03, 2010, 04:25:23 AM
Just beautiful !!!!

A stunning song, and like the others said already : bring up the vox !!!
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: henwrench on March 03, 2010, 01:32:04 PM
Ace!! Loved that tune, the production is great. Pure Guava, mang.

                                                 henwrench
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Covermark on March 03, 2010, 03:07:31 PM
Quote from: Gritter on January 28, 2010, 11:37:33 AMReally great love song...so nice to hear. Well sung with passion and with a voice like that the vocals should be louder in the mix.


So it is !
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: SwanSong on March 03, 2010, 06:35:36 PM
Superb. song..! agree with avbove re vocals could have been mixed
stronger..otherwise thoroughly enjoyed the song music the whole
nine yards. This song is a Touchdown. in my books........Neil
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Ted on April 16, 2010, 01:00:33 PM
Bump!

Just heard this one for the first time.

I've written a couple of songs for my wife.  If were to lie and say I wrote this one, it would probably be her favorite.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: T.C. Elliott on April 17, 2010, 07:04:22 AM
Sweet song, Gary. Very nicely done.
Title: Re: Hold You-(original by Gary F)
Post by: Gary F on April 17, 2010, 09:20:23 AM
 Thanks guys for listening and for taking time to comment!!!!
Gaty