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Title: "remember rise up #4" - back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 07, 2009, 02:37:27 AM
Hi everyone
haven't been here for ages...  what do you think of my last collaboration with jbsteelguitar ? All advice welcomed.
Title: Re: back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 07, 2009, 02:39:30 AM
I forgot to say this is jsebsteelguitar's first ever recorded song, and he seems very proud  ;D of the final output !
here are is web sites : http://www.myspace.com/jsebsteelguitar
http://www.youtube.com/user/jsebsteelguitar
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Greeny on August 07, 2009, 02:48:04 AM
Hey! You're back! We need you on here to represent France (you're still the only Frenchman amongst our multi-national community as far as I know...).

There's some very tasty spanish / gypsy-jazz flavoured guitar here. The whole thing moves along very nicely. Is it an original?

Just a thought - I think this would sound really nice with you singing in French. Maybe you should do a French version for us?!

Either way, it's a lovely piece of work. Great collaboration guys.
Title: Re: back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 07, 2009, 02:56:51 AM
I can't believe I'm the only french guy here.
 My friend jsebsteelguitar,  has tried to join the community, and that would have doubled our ranks,but he's had trouble logging in...

Yes, this is an original, I suspect my fellow jseb to have lods of them hidden in is barn...

I'd love the sing something in french, but we french people suffer of cultural complex when we sing in french : if you sing something intelligent, it's boring, if you sing a love song, it's silly. ::) Only sad or funny songs are alloyed - it's time for revolution !
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Greeny on August 07, 2009, 03:04:42 AM
I'm a Serge Gainsborg fan, so I think French-language songs are great!
Title: Re: back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 07, 2009, 03:19:06 AM
Yes, he wasn't averse to social control !
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Bluesberry on August 07, 2009, 05:57:21 AM
Really, really nice playing.  Excellent in fact.
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Diego Ayala on August 07, 2009, 06:10:54 AM
I totaly enjoyed the song and play it a second time as I kept wanting to add a bit of percussion to it - quietly as my wife sleeping in the other room...  I will be downloading it to give it a listen via my home stereo later on.
Title: Re: back again
Post by: launched on August 07, 2009, 07:29:01 AM
The chord progression is wonderful, and the lead notes stand out perfectly. I think the singing was very good - A French version would be cool, too!!

Thanks for sharing!


Mark
Title: Re: back again
Post by: OsCKilO on August 07, 2009, 10:45:01 AM
I found this completely, utterly,  absolutely and enormously enjoyable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I love your style!

Full of French Coolness!!!!!!

I love France (The Somme and Arras in particular).

This reminds me of the excellent vibe I experienced out there!!!


Votre guitare est formidable!

C'est une grande chanson!



Peace

T(Osckilo)
Title: Re: back again
Post by: cuthbert on August 07, 2009, 10:55:50 AM
I liked this, too...and I agree - a French vocal take would be tres magnifique!

(I don't speak French, but I could listen to Serge Gainsbourg, Jane Birken, Bridgette Bardot, and France Gall all day)   ;D
Title: Re: back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 07, 2009, 02:16:40 PM
Quote from: Diego Ayala on August 07, 2009, 06:10:54 AMI totaly enjoyed the song and play it a second time as I kept wanting to add a bit of percussion to it - quietly as my wife sleeping in the other room...  I will be downloading it to give it a listen via my home stereo later on.
please do so , join the percussion in. I hope that for once, orur tempo stayed the same all the way long

thanks to everybody for  your support !
Title: Re: back again
Post by: hooper on August 07, 2009, 02:43:17 PM
The spanish/gypsy-jazz thing sounds great and at times it reminded me of Dire Straights unplugged (wait... I've never heard Dire Straithts unplugged...  :D)  So, the traffic going by made it sound like we were sitting in a bistro... somewhere far away from home. I like those clean-sounding acoustic guitars and the voice sounds fine too... just wish it was a bit more up front in the mix.  Fine job and a pleasure to listen to!
Title: Re: back again
Post by: danieldesete on August 08, 2009, 02:16:25 AM
Quote from: hooper on August 07, 2009, 02:43:17 PMat times it reminded me of Dire Straights unplugged (wait... I've never heard Dire Straithts unplugged...  :D) 

Of course you spotted the influence. Here's how my friend plays them unplugged, in standard tuning !


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWCmnuGsdU0
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Facemask93 on August 08, 2009, 02:47:59 AM
nice playing , the two guitar parts gel together very nicely , with a twist french accent on the vox , really good



Facemask93
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Ferryman on August 08, 2009, 04:34:45 AM
Great acoustic guitar playing and the two of you play very well together. The guitar sounds are very good in the recording as well. I agree, a French version would be great, it might sound like a mellow Negresses Vertes!

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: back again
Post by: The Reverend 48 on August 08, 2009, 08:46:59 AM
Loved this Well Done!
Title: Re: back again
Post by: guitarron on August 08, 2009, 10:36:02 AM
yes-this is really enjoyable track
Title: Re: back again
Post by: steelguitar on August 10, 2009, 02:12:42 AM
Hi!
I'm new here.. danieldesete told me good things on the boss community...
Thank you very much for all your nice messages!

Some of you quote Gainsbourg. Also love Serge Gainsbourg... it's but very hard and difficult to write a song in french like him, with wonderful lyrics and beautyful melodies!
I work with danieldesete on a french version of the song, with cocal take by danieldesete...

Musically
jsebsteelguitar
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Geir on August 10, 2009, 05:56:14 AM
Great playing of a lovely song!

Love it!
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Hook on August 07, 2014, 04:37:17 AM
OTD bump, great tune!
Rock On!
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Groundy on August 06, 2016, 11:36:27 PM
OTD Bump, Missed this originally......


Alex
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Johnny Robbo on August 07, 2016, 04:32:22 AM
I love this custom of the OTD bump... it means I get to hear all kinds of gems like this that I missed 1st time around. It conjures up imagery of the French countryside.... Beautiful acoustic playing & I love that nonchalant air that the vocals capture. Superb stuff!
Title: The OTD bump?
Post by: leighelse on August 10, 2016, 01:23:19 AM
Quote from: Johnny Robbo on August 07, 2016, 04:32:22 AMI love this custom of the OTD bump

What does OTD stand for?

This is a great track. I look forward to the version en français. Listening on headphones the vocals could be a little higher in the mix, but that doesn't detract from the overall pleasure of listening to it.
Title: Re: The OTD bump?
Post by: 64Guitars on August 10, 2016, 10:10:50 AM
Quote from: leighelse on August 10, 2016, 01:23:19 AMWhat does OTD stand for?

On This Day. When songs come up in the On This Day jukebox (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?action=OnThisDay) on the anniversary of the day they were originally posted, they often get bumped. Some people like to abbreviate this to "OTD bump" or even "OTDB".

There's even an On This Day BBCode tag that looks like this:

[otdb]

and produces this:

On This Day Bump
Title: Re: The OTD bump?
Post by: leighelse on August 10, 2016, 01:38:30 PM
Quote from: 64Guitars on August 10, 2016, 10:10:50 AMOn This Day.

Ha! So obvious once you know. Thank you.
Title: Re: back again
Post by: Groundy on August 06, 2017, 10:30:59 PM
Once again OTD Bump,

Pure class...

Alex
Title: Re: back again
Post by: steelguitar on August 12, 2017, 06:22:29 AM
On This Day ahh!!! ok  ;D

 ::)

Jean-Sébastien