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Title: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 18, 2009, 01:51:54 PM
This one has done the rounds quite a bit, it's had a few changes and multiple vocals, different effects, strange guitar tracks which have either been ditched or removed by the aliens.

This isn't finished, I have still to put some more percussion on but I'm struggling to find the time. It's only at 128Kb/s at the moment.

This is Hazy, a trippy sort of Mothership arriving song.

James is on vocals and maybe some guitar but I'm not sure.
Tim is on backing vox and effects and is doing most if not all of the guitar work.
I got the easy job as usual and plinked a bit of dum...dum...dum... bass onto it at the end and then mixed it all back up.

I like my job. :)

We hope you like it.


Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: hooper on July 18, 2009, 03:01:49 PM
So, has Jim been hanging out on Bosko's MySpace page?   :D

I like the chorus especially.  The bass tone sounds very good.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: StevieM on July 18, 2009, 03:35:59 PM
How the hell do you guys do this??? Yet another bloody good one!!

Can I ask a question? ( that's looks stupid putting it like that, 'cos I am, just by saying that ???). Where did the name Jemima's Kite come from?
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 18, 2009, 03:45:17 PM
James, Mike, Tim, -------  JamEs MIke tim ..... It's an anagram, almost, we had to lose an 'M' because there was one to many. So I'm now called Ike.

Changed my name by Deed Poll. At least I'm not called 'Halfwit' or 'Dogface'.

I think that Tharek prefers my Sunday name 'Old C***y B*ll*cks', but that won't fit into an anagram either. 

Tim, Jim and Ike.   No.... that's wrong, Ike, Tim and Jim..... nah that doesn't work either......

Half a glass of Cab Sauv' and I'm gone.....
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 18, 2009, 03:58:14 PM
Oi !!!!!!

C***y B*ll*cks!!!!!!!!! 

This has turned out to be my favourite JK track!

I Think it is just Stunning!!!!!!!!

This is something I would turn up if it came on the radio whilst driving.

I really love this one!

I think this is the one that will take you places Lads...

Where is the soundclick ref?

Peace Guys

T(Osckilo)

and Ike...... Half a glass?

Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2009, 04:10:14 PM
my daughter jenna loves this one
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 18, 2009, 04:11:49 PM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on July 18, 2009, 04:10:14 PMmy daughter jenna loves this one

The E.M.O and the boy like this one!!!!

He was doing a little dance to it when he heard it!

Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: tafka on July 18, 2009, 05:20:40 PM
this song is crying out for a Guitar Solo
that is the only thing that is missing
oops the bass needs popping up in the mix a bit..can't hear it.
2 things missing (imho)
T
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 18, 2009, 05:51:51 PM
I dont know T.....

It sits nice at the moment....

Too much going on(Little sound effects....Harmonies.......and a lot of guitar)  for a solo...... I think its refined to a high degree... If there was one it would have to be Quite distant in the mix...

I just ran this through the MBR to see what it would sound like with more bass..

Raising the Bass would detract from the Vocal and effects a bit....

A Dirty/Live version would be interesting though.....
Thats when the Bass could really let loose with less in the mix!


Peace Bro

T(Osckilo)
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Facemask93 on July 18, 2009, 06:15:26 PM
really nice song guys ,great melody ,fantastic vox as unusual ,well done


Facemask93l
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Bluesberry on July 18, 2009, 06:15:42 PM
This is stunning boys.  I get a U2 vibe myself, especially the vocals and that guitar line.  I also would like the bass up a bit more myself, There is a monster bass line going on here but it is hard to hear it properly with all that trebly guitar on top of it.  Great stuff.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2009, 07:04:49 PM
Quotefantastic vox as unusual
as unusual??????????
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 18, 2009, 07:11:22 PM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on July 18, 2009, 07:04:49 PM
Quotefantastic vox as unusual
as unusual??????????

Means it is usually just brilliant..........

This Time it's Fantastic!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: launched on July 18, 2009, 07:40:07 PM
Love this one - It's super catchy, and like I've said before, I like the direction you guys are going - The new songs are magnificent!!!

This will get several listens from me!

Mark
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: guitarron on July 19, 2009, 05:12:54 AM
Quote from: launched on July 18, 2009, 07:40:07 PMLove this one - It's super catchy, and like I've said before, I like the direction you guys are going - The new songs are magnificent!!!

This will get several listens from me!

Mark
love the build up-power chords are dear to my heart
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Diego Ayala on July 19, 2009, 05:47:18 AM
Just downloaded this song!!!  A lot going on...  Once Tammy wakes up will crank my stereo and give it a listen.  There are so many possibilities with our br units = wow!Love the arrangement and how everything just fits that Hazy feeling - and the addition of the news report was excellent---  cool psoting!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 19, 2009, 01:54:07 PM


(http://www.k3pgp.org/seti/aliens.jpg)

Sorry....

Saw the oppertunity to sneek some boobs in here.....

Cool Theme though Guys.........


Er......

I'll be going now.......
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Greeny on July 20, 2009, 02:48:54 AM
This is sounding mighty fine with the bass on it! Nice one, Mike.

My son loves this one... I think there's a mighty powerful hook on that lovely orh chorus. I've been singing it in my head too, lol.


Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Ferryman on July 20, 2009, 04:52:28 AM
Nice wall of sound there, Flash must have had the Phil Spector wig on......

Great build up and big guitar sounds. It just all works for me.

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 20, 2009, 03:49:50 PM
I need somebodies wig, that's for sure!

Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 20, 2009, 04:02:00 PM

Quote from: Flash Harry on July 20, 2009, 03:49:50 PMI need somebodies wig, that's for sure!



Yes....

Yes you do....

(http://img.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2008/05_02/baldyDM0405_228x324.jpg)
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 20, 2009, 04:39:54 PM
He's here, I've seen him today! He really really exists. 

(Just so you know, I'm stopping in a hotel in the centre of Glasgow for a couple of days)

But he really really does exist!  Honest! And his mate.....

And for those who are left un-moved by this revelation, you must check out Rab C. Nesbit. He's a philosopher, a social commentator and an endearing drunk.

I can understand why ORH is waiting for the mothership. Two days, oh god....
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Tangled Wires on July 20, 2009, 04:53:52 PM
Great song, and especially like that chorus. There is a lot of fantastic playing going on in this song!!!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: OsCKilO on July 20, 2009, 06:01:28 PM
Quote from: Flash Harry on July 20, 2009, 04:39:54 PMHe's here, I've seen him today! He really really exists. 

(Just so you know, I'm stopping in a hotel in the centre of Glasgow for a couple of days)

But he really really does exist!  Honest! And his mate.....

And for those who are left un-moved by this revelation, you must check out Rab C. Nesbit. He's a philosopher, a social commentator and an endearing drunk.

I can understand why ORH is waiting for the mothership. Two days, oh god....

I feel the need to smoke a cigar.............
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Wiley on July 20, 2009, 06:26:01 PM
Great job guys!!! And don't ask me why, but the way it starts out reminded me a little of ghost riders in the sky,  If you've ever heard that. LOL But very good indeed
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: guitarron on July 20, 2009, 06:34:45 PM
Quote from: wiley on July 20, 2009, 06:26:01 PMGreat job guys!!! And don't ask me why, but the way it starts out reminded me a little of ghost riders in the sky,  If you've ever heard that. LOL But very good indeed
i hear that too-awesome
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 26, 2009, 07:21:26 AM
song now live at soundclick http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7879909
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 29, 2009, 05:07:56 AM
the song is now at no2 in the soundclick post punk chart get us to no1 guys http://www.soundclick.com/genres/charts.cfm?genre=Alternative&subgenreID=223
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Greeny on July 29, 2009, 05:09:11 AM
go go go!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: lg on July 29, 2009, 08:33:40 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT !!!!
Kinda Neil Young/U2 type of sound.
This is in my top 10 of my favs of your guys songs.
Great!
Bravo!

LG
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Satchwood on July 29, 2009, 01:01:52 PM
Cool JK tune!!  Like a pre-war-of-the-worlds prep song - this is really great!! 

One of my favorite JK songs for sure!!!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: lg on September 17, 2009, 08:41:13 AM
BUMP

LG
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Post by: Tony W on September 17, 2009, 08:50:11 AM
I love bumps, and this one is spectacular. First listen, but always a fan Of Jemima's Kite.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 22, 2009, 02:37:52 PM
got an email from the production team at tom robinson's introducing show on bbc radio6music that they might play this fingers crossed, they are also considering playing where do we go from here
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: indierik on October 22, 2009, 06:08:13 PM
I can't believe I never commented on this song. I love it!! I love the build up and intensity. You guys are good, very good!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: dragonshade on October 28, 2009, 10:33:25 AM
GREAT Kite song!!!! From the first chords it grabs you and holds you, and then spins your head around with a BIG smile the whole way through!!! I LOVE the center new feed section, fits SO well. Amazing song guys.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Tangled Wires on October 28, 2009, 11:06:06 AM
I had forgotten how good this was, probably my favourite JK song!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 19, 2010, 06:01:19 PM
bump
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: lg on February 21, 2010, 08:09:39 AM
This is one of my favorite of the Kite's!
Still love the hell out of it!
Cool bump, by the way....

LG
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: hank987 on February 21, 2010, 12:57:50 PM
This was a great bump...awesome. ORH, your vocals are always so on all the time!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Frank53 on February 21, 2010, 01:14:22 PM
This is excellent. Very full, great vocals and performance.
Good fantasy... or is it?  :o
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: chrisnickey64 on February 21, 2010, 02:09:49 PM
i liking this one ALOT !!!  downloadin this puppy into my Mp3 player ASAP!  good work guys!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: rvincent55 on February 21, 2010, 03:54:28 PM
I really like this tune a lot...the only comment I'd offer is to revisit the mix a bit - you've got some nice backing vocals there, but they tend to get lost in all the elements going on at that point.

Maybe some EQ touchup to give each element more of it's own "space"?

I'd raise the bass too, but then, I'm a bass player..... ;)

Nice track though...I absolutely loved the "newsflash" insert - that was great!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on June 19, 2010, 07:09:30 AM
this popped up on my piepod on random play so i thought i should bump it
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Jim1970 on June 19, 2010, 07:32:31 AM
Great song!!  Thanks for Bumping this!!

Enjoying this one !!! Love everything about this!!!
SWWWEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!
JIM
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Kevin Mammoth on June 19, 2010, 07:36:36 AM
loving this song - the powerful chord changes give it an epic feel - surely there is room for a towering outro solo on that track!
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2011, 01:13:54 AM
on this day bump
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 18, 2011, 04:31:55 AM
Incredible. Two yeasrs ago. I was in Glasgow and met James Higgins for the first time while I was there.

what was that about not being able to un-ring a bell?
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on February 01, 2013, 03:14:57 AM
ORH has covered himself in a Uke carnage fest. This is the original which I have just listened to again and although it's a bit of self trumpeting, I think this is one of our best.

Here's a link to James' fab uke version https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=17589.0 (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=17589.0)
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Geir on February 01, 2013, 03:26:35 AM
Quote from: Flash Harry on July 18, 2011, 04:31:55 AMwhat was that about not being able to un-ring a bell?
;D
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: kenny mac on February 01, 2013, 04:11:59 AM
I agree flash,this is easily jk,s finest moment,It has a special feel to it,everybody on it is at the top of their game here.
It shows just what can be achieved when people collab online.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2013, 06:41:41 AM
otdb
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on July 19, 2013, 06:42:24 AM
Four years! It all seems kinda hazy to me now.....
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Flash Harry on November 27, 2015, 05:54:28 PM
Six years, that's more than 14% of my life.
Title: Re: Jemima's Kite - Hazy, new original from the boys....
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 18, 2017, 04:03:54 AM
OTDB

we really need to do some new stuff.