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Title: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 11, 2009, 10:21:41 AM
Jim (OldRottenHead) knocked the dust off this one that I had in collabs, cleaned up my lyrics and worked his magic. And all before lunch. Wow!

Had to squash it a little to make it fit.

Peace,

Mark

Should have done this years ago - Here's the final mix with SE's cool rhythm guitar additions:

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Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Tangled Wires on July 11, 2009, 10:29:00 AM
Wow, that brooding bassline gets you right from the start and is the backbone of this great song. The guitar parts are exquisite, vocals are spot on and the production is honed to perfection. The song just draws you in.

All in all, a fantastic song!!!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2009, 10:41:37 AM
QuoteJim (OldRottenHead) knocked the dust off this one that I had in collabs, cleaned up my lyrics and worked his magic. And all before lunch. Wow!
the lyrics where all pretty much in place i just juggled em about a bit.

this was fun to do ,

and i dont know if i said already but that bass sounds good well worth the 200 mile trip.

 i still see lots of space for more instruments on this wot do you think mark?
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: galestermusic on July 11, 2009, 10:42:18 AM
Wow if this is not soundclicked it should be. Nice bass line!!!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 11, 2009, 10:50:17 AM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on July 11, 2009, 10:41:37 AMthis fun to do

A blast!!

Quote from: oldrottenhead on July 11, 2009, 10:41:37 AMi still see lots of space for more instruments on this wot do you think mark?

There's plenty of room for more stuff. Lots of possibilities here :D
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Facemask93 on July 11, 2009, 11:15:41 AM
This is really good guy's , i think it's possible that the collaborations on this site bring out the best in what is already a hot bed of talent , this is a superb track , again another download to the ipod , well done boy's


Facemask93
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: knniggits on July 11, 2009, 03:54:30 PM
Love that driving bass and the vocals sound great,top job :)
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Bluesberry on July 11, 2009, 05:01:05 PM
You are a bass playing machine.  This is great.  WOW, double WOW Mark.  You instrumentation is stunning, a composer with the bass.  Your guitar work is great.  What a frigging vocal from ORH, holy sh*t this is intense.  Brilliant.  WOW.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: OsCKilO on July 11, 2009, 05:19:20 PM
Mark!!!!!!!!

Your Bass is amazing bro!!!!!

Sometimes it is all you need in a track! You have proved it here!

But your Guitar parts prove the perfect Polish!!!!!!!!


I Love the theme of the Lyric!!!

Near death and after life stuff!

The next step!

ORH.......

Atheists aren't supposed to be singing about that stuff!!!!!!


Wicked Vox.........

Never heard you so distorted ....... Was such a driving tune that it needed it though!

Cool as F**k!!!!!

Peace Guys


T(Osckilo)
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Geir on July 11, 2009, 07:50:09 PM
Brilliant collab ! Love that bass and the annoying :) guitar ... a great track to begin with, and then ORH once again takes a song one step further Love the vox on this one too.  ..... and that bass is really something!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 12, 2009, 02:54:09 PM
Thanks for the comments, guys!! That bass part was fun (could have ben cleaner, but it was fun to do).

I thought Jim's vox were really cool, too - Effect #22 ststeel in stereo.

We tried to get some echo-delayed strat for this, but no luck - I don't have the gear or talent for it. Anybody?

Peace,

Mark
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: StevieM on July 12, 2009, 03:06:12 PM
Bloody fantastic guys!! Hair up on back of neck time here.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Flash Harry on July 12, 2009, 03:48:00 PM
Wow, very Happy Mondays. Love it. The bass is sweet. Really nice. Great vox too James.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: SteveG on July 12, 2009, 04:46:00 PM
Very trance like bordering on hypnotic. Good job guys, not my cup of tea, but very well done.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: OsCKilO on July 12, 2009, 07:59:01 PM
This needs a bump!

The bass and guitars just makes you feel like a Bad-ass when you listen to it!

ORH.....

F*cking awesome vox....

This was a real Tag team!

You Guys work great together!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: guitarron on July 13, 2009, 05:21:10 AM
this is coola as hell-love that bass-very hypnotic
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Bluesberry on July 13, 2009, 05:35:20 AM
I was listening to this one on my way in to work in the car (Ipod), cranked loud.  Damn guys this is stunning.  Great song Mark, great vocal ORH.  This one sounds really good LOUD.  What a site this is, incredible music springing up like weeds all over the place.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 13, 2009, 06:19:34 AM
Thanks Stevie, Flash, Steve, T, Ron, BB!!

Quote from: osckilo on July 12, 2009, 07:59:01 PMThe bass and guitars just makes you feel like a Bad-ass when you listen to it!

That's some good butter - where do you buy that? :D

Quote from: Bluesberry on July 13, 2009, 05:35:20 AMThis one sounds really good LOUD.

Thanks, BB - the bass is a little fluttery and has some dead spots, but I think it sounds good in the car, too. Your stuff is prett crankable in the vehicle as well. (The Tull cover stays in the player - love that one...)

Mark
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: lg on July 13, 2009, 08:39:13 AM
Great piece of work guys!
I cannot add anything that hasn't been already said....
So i'll just say 'Bravo' and ditto to all the above!

LG
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Ferryman on July 13, 2009, 03:41:46 PM
Supreb stuff, that bassline and particularly the sound is to die for! Clever way you double the riff with the bassline Mark. Killer dreamy vox by ORH, this is right in Osckilo territory, no wonder T likes it! Break out the Hawkwind guys. Love it.

Cheers,

Nigel

Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Wiley on July 14, 2009, 03:28:24 AM
Can't add much either to whats been said. But I do like your bass right up front.  Many times the bass is lost in the background.  And I believe it is the driving power of most songs.  So my  hats off to you!!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Greeny on July 14, 2009, 05:13:15 AM
Loving what I hear. Those vocals are outstanding orh. Just takes an already great track into the stratosphere. Very reminiscent of The Charlatans, which is no bad thing!!!! F*cking awesome track. I wish it was a Jemima's Kite one, lol.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: OsCKilO on July 16, 2009, 04:32:17 PM
This needs a bump!

(http://images.starcraftmazter.net/4chan/for_forums/bump.jpg)
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Bluesberry on October 10, 2010, 04:20:31 PM
Bring it back, damn man bring it back.  That bass growl knocks me right back into yesterday.  ORH sounds like a man possessed here.  Fantastic song needing to be heard again.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on October 10, 2010, 04:28:07 PM
i'm sure i said on another thread somewhere that bb is the best bumper. am i right or am i right
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: corryhully on October 10, 2010, 04:35:26 PM
great stuff. that bass line is so cool and orh psycho-delic vocal, an allround winner.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: T.C. Elliott on October 11, 2010, 09:10:10 AM
That bass line is really driving... but that processed guitar bit that repeats is great. With the space on the vocal track it almost sounds phased. It really fits together nicely.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Bluesberry on July 11, 2011, 10:06:24 AM
OTD BUMP..............a bump for that bass line.........yeah
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on July 11, 2011, 10:31:17 AM
Nicely Bump'd BB... hadn't had the pleasure yet. This is killer. Way to go guys.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2012, 01:54:10 AM
sheesh three years ago today and i think our first collab mark. we need to do another one.
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Hook on July 11, 2012, 05:53:25 AM
This is a mammoth, gem of brilliance! To repeat what every one has said that bass line knocked me down and rolled right over me and the vocals are top shelf! Great tune, completely radio ready!
Rock On!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Geir on July 11, 2012, 06:02:01 AM
Yep this is a great one Mark!! I seem to remember that someone added an extra guitar and I added a lead. Tried to search for it but couldn't find it. Was it ever posted? Or have I been dreaming ::) ???
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2012, 06:19:41 AM
i thought that too geir, will have a dive in the archive
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2012, 06:27:50 AM
wow i had to dive deep for this little baby scroll down a bit geir it's there, and well worth the dive.

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=2990.0

ok breathe slowly phew!

or go straight to it

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=2990.0;msg=40364
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: SE on July 11, 2012, 06:58:20 AM
What a great bump remember this from ages ago, what a groove just top drawer, will be playing this all day!!
Just checked, can,t believe I did,nt post on this seems like I,ve definetly heard this before still killer!
Doh! thats how,played a very small part of this totally forgot, well chuffed!!!

Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 11, 2012, 08:12:58 AM
This was fun - My first international collaboration. Big thanks to Jim, Geir and John - Love you guys!

Quote from: SE on July 11, 2012, 06:58:20 AMDoh! thats how,played a very small part of this totally forgot, well chuffed!!!

An integral component to the song, bro! Sounded awesome!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 11, 2012, 08:15:26 AM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on July 11, 2012, 01:54:10 AMsheesh three years ago today and i think our first collab mark. we need to do another one.

I do believe it was our first - Hell, it was my first SC collab as well. I agree, it's been a few months, another one is in order!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: launched on July 11, 2012, 08:16:44 AM
Quote from: Bluesberry on July 11, 2011, 10:06:24 AMOTD BUMP..............a bump for that bass line.........yeah

And if it were not for you, I'd be long forgotten, bro!
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: dobrodaddy on July 11, 2012, 09:36:38 AM
Love it when you guys dive into the archives.  Great song Paul!  So many layers and ORH's amazing vox ices the cake.  Like a pearl, SE and Geir additions increase the luster and shimmer.  Very cool international collab!  Love it!  DD
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Redler on July 11, 2012, 01:54:40 PM
Haven't heard this before! Just a superb collab and a great tune! Fine job and the bass line is excellent!! Greeny got Charlatans vibe, so got I as well!

Kari
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Kenny B on July 12, 2012, 01:46:53 PM
MAN!!! This is excellent!!!  Diggin that BASS Mark!!!
ORH's Lyrics and Vocals are perfect and SE's guitar completes
the package ... freakin WOW!!!

kb
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2013, 07:13:21 AM
jings 4 years ago today
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: henwrench on July 11, 2013, 07:27:35 AM
 :o :o :o :o :o :o

           What a STUNNER!!!

                  I'm gonna have to.....

                          (https://songcrafters.org/images/fun/Songcrafters%20Classic.png)


                                               ....break one of these out!!

                                                                henwrench
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Groundy on July 10, 2017, 10:57:33 PM
OTD Bump..

Nice one Guys...


Alex
Title: Re: Apart (Original by ORH & Launched)
Post by: Oldrottenhead on July 11, 2017, 02:15:30 PM
since this was done i have met everyone involved in this song and i love each and every one of them. man that bass is killer.