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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on April 16, 2024, 02:28:41 PM

Title: Run Run Run
Post by: thetworegs on April 16, 2024, 02:28:41 PM
I'm not sure where this one came from but can only think its the series on Netflix that I've just finished watching Ripely which is excellently filmed each scene is perfectly shot its a masterpiece although the lyrics have nothing to do with the series anyway back to the song I recorded the acoustic with a mic and then recorded the the vocal adding a bit of FX
The callous collector of my thought
Has taken my mind
Grappled with my future, pulled down the window blind
Darkness has  dragged me to the land of the blind

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowhere to hide

I pull the thorns from within my eyes
Blood spills to the carpet and stains like red wine
The cat attacks the mouse the mouse begins to squeal

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowehre to hide
 
Dream can not bring the dead back to life
They're lost to time within the universal mine
The Pleasure of the gun
The echo the shot that stopped time

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowehre to hide
 
Break

The Priest enters alone through the door
Finds me a wash in blood upon the cold tiled floor
Screaming obscenties to the now dead whore

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowehre to hide
 
The callous collector of thought
Has taken my mind
Grappled with my future and pulled down the window blind
Darkness has dragged me to the land of the blind

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowehre to hide

I run run run run
I run run run
I run run run but can find nowehre to hide
   
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: StephenM on April 16, 2024, 02:50:29 PM
the lyrics are amazing.

the rest of the song is just plain Thetworegs greatness.

those lyrics. wow.
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: Pru on April 16, 2024, 07:07:43 PM
i agree with Stephen, brill lyrics and what a voice!!
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 16, 2024, 10:56:40 PM
Great song, Trev and sung with such intensity along with great lyrics.
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: Trist on April 17, 2024, 03:36:19 AM
Cool lyrics  the vocal performance is excellent very forceful, nice acoustic sound on the guitar with the recording, enjoyed
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: Mike_S on April 17, 2024, 08:16:29 AM
Great song Trev. I watched Ripley too, fantastic it was. This does invoke some of the tension from the show I think. But just a very cool tune.

Mike
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: BerryPatch on April 18, 2024, 03:03:41 PM
You pull off this hard style of singing effortlessly, a total treat to hear you like this. Really cool song too, ominous lyrics and frantic acoustic strumming. Little bits of this remind me of Ween somewhat. Great job
Title: Re: Run Run Run
Post by: Ted on April 25, 2024, 08:19:53 AM
I don't know the series or film to which you referred, but this definitely has the feeling of a song based on a much bigger story, full of twists and turns.
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