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Title: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Zoltan on March 23, 2024, 12:02:28 PM
A quick little ditty... I might need to remix this later.

ZERO FUZZ GIVEN

Zero fuzz given
That's what she said
It's either the beard, or the highway
That face ain't coming to bed!

Rasputin

You're looking like a bum
Head full of hair
Fuzz face
You ain't coming to bed!

Rasputin x 4

It's either the beard, or the highway
That's what she said
Bearded clam
The mission has failed!

Edit: I invited Grace Slick to help with the session. After drinking a gallon of spiked up peppermint tea she got her vibrato going!
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: StephenM on March 23, 2024, 01:05:42 PM
razz pudding
looking like a bomb... head full of hair... fuzz face, you ain't coming to bed...

rah rah rahzzzz putin....

either the bed or the hiway... bearded clam?  did i just hear that?  I love that.

zero fuzz given..

the song is sort of punk metal... with U2 sort of on the bass.... so cool... so different... so fresh... so romantic (not)...
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Zoltan on March 23, 2024, 02:34:23 PM
Quote from: StephenM on March 23, 2024, 01:05:42 PMthe song is sort of punk metal... with U2 sort of on the bass

Oh, i shall then call it a blazing failure! I could have lived with a fuzztastic comparison like Fu Manchu (a band i didn't try to ape).

My intention was very 70s. More like Steppenwolf. Here's a totally different mix.
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Ray Brookes on March 23, 2024, 04:58:10 PM
Certainly got a Steppenwolf feel to this cool rocker. Like the sound of those guitars - full fuzz.
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: thetworegs on March 24, 2024, 05:16:35 AM
You just don't give a Fuzz do you those guitars sound like they don't either great job
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: StephenM on March 24, 2024, 07:12:11 AM
Quote from: Zoltan on March 23, 2024, 02:34:23 PM
Quote from: StephenM on March 23, 2024, 01:05:42 PMthe song is sort of punk metal... with U2 sort of on the bass

Oh, i shall then call it a blazing failure! I could have lived with a fuzztastic comparison like Fu Manchu (a band i didn't try to ape).

My intention was very 70s. More like Steppenwolf. Here's a totally different mix.


Geesh, don't listen to me... i don't know much...especially about genre!
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: StephenM on March 24, 2024, 08:16:02 AM
yeah oh yeah...

I love the Slick additions... and yeah... I could go with the SW comp, and you were born to be wild (but not wild cherry)

but my favorite part now is that smash time drum thing...

crazy mix over in my left ear... digging it

that bass sounds more in the right ear... I dig this thinking.. It is like a 3 piece live where you hear the stage amps... and directions.

this gets better and better on the 5th listen in a row... I could let this mesmerize me all day.... wicked sounds
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on March 24, 2024, 11:24:14 AM
Cool little track zoltan, I think it has a 70's feel but also a 90's, the drums feel like that to me.
Love the heavy fuzz guitar tones. Great lyrics too  :)
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Zoltan on March 24, 2024, 11:49:05 AM
Here's a Summer of No Love mix. With one guitar track (this time using carcosa) + bass (carcosa) and organ track.

The carcosa is such a velcroy thing that i played the whole thing differently...
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: godinqc on March 24, 2024, 07:13:16 PM
Definitively a 70's vibe .. But I also feel a mix of Steppenwolf and B52's .. Really like the Fuzz..
Great work.
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: StephenM on March 25, 2024, 06:31:47 AM
well, I downloaded the first two versions so I may as well the one with the killer organ in it...

yeah... man this sounds like hell on fire...

you had fun... I had fun... the kids are scared... cover their ears... the cockroaches are scurrying for shelter, but they don't know where to go because they already were in shelters... maybe this is the anecdote for cockroaches... I will put speakers in the kitchen... turn this up loud and blow them out of the walls.. where they will be incinerated by this vibrations... I can see them melting now.. (sorry we have a bit of a cock roach problem... I manage them pretty well but those damn things are evil)...
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Ron D Bowes on March 25, 2024, 07:49:56 AM
Only Zoltan could write a song about shaving (or lack thereof) LOL. I like the Ra Ra Rasputin nod. I'm sure Boney M would approve. Chaotic fun track with plenty of fuzz.
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Johnbee on March 25, 2024, 01:38:54 PM
This is so cool!  You and Stephan should collab (if you haven't already).  It takes a long time to get to the Rasputin stage of a beard.  Are you that far?

 :) John B
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Zoltan on March 25, 2024, 02:04:22 PM
Quote from: Johnbee on March 25, 2024, 01:38:54 PMIt takes a long time to get to the Rasputin stage of a beard.  Are you that far?

I let it grow for closer to a year... Then i killed it :( Where there was once a cool looking bearded dude looking in the mirror... There's now a guy who looks like a dork!
Title: Re: Zero Fuzz Given
Post by: Ted on March 31, 2024, 06:08:36 AM
Love it!

Fun fact: My wife came home today after being out of town for a week. I was expecting her this afternoon, but she came home a 7 a.m. – before I had a chance to shave my 7+ day fuzz. Not quite Rasputin-level, but it had to go ASAP.

Quote from: Ray Brookes on March 23, 2024, 04:58:10 PMCertainly got a Steppenwolf feel to this cool rocker.

I was thinking Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds – my favorite song ever by that band (https://youtu.be/PxWS1ufr5xI).