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Title: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 28, 2024, 03:06:23 PM
This is the last song for my concept album (LMAO) "Simple Songs", hopefully in the near future i will make the album and artwork available for free download from my onedrive folders and provide a link here. https://open.spotify.com/album/1p53SHzXSemcTf4wXIMsI7?si=q4-PkaKxRRqLtlh7jEop_g
Any road up.
It is what it is.

When you try to explain the joke
It's just not funny any more
The pleasure's in the moment
But the moment has passed
I'm not talking rockect science
Or quantum chemistry
It's a simple story
If you listen if you listen you might hear
Do you get it
Can't you read my body language
Am I from a foreign land
Oh can't you see me
Or take my hand
Are you unaware
Of my communication
It's a simple story
If you listen  if you listen you might hear
Do you get it
If You Get It
W/M
By
Oldrottenhead
HB Bass Guitar
Fender Telecaster
GarageBand Drums
and
vocals
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 28, 2024, 03:39:45 PM
Album here https://onedrive.live.com/?WT.mc_id=PROD%5FOL%2DWeb%5FInApp%5FLeftNav%5FFreeOfficeBarOD&ocid=PROD%5FOL%2DWeb%5FInApp%5FLeftNav%5FFreeOfficeBarOD&id=48716FDA7DC89AEB%217822&cid=48716FDA7DC89AEB
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: StephenM on February 28, 2024, 06:08:22 PM
I am reaching for the volume fader... up, up, up.

oh yes.

this is so good.... the garage band drums are solid... and then they do this delayed thing.
I am getting it.

great lyrics, songwriting, singing... man way to go
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: hardlock on February 28, 2024, 07:41:06 PM
Another hit from the master - good one! 8)
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Ted on February 29, 2024, 02:44:31 AM
Bass strumming? I need to see your permit, Sir.

Those drums sound great – and also like a happy accident. Or did you dial-up "Swing" on purpose? The lyrics are what the drummer is trying to say to the bass player.

The drummer is trying to swing against the straight rhythm of the bass.

Are you unaware
Of my communication?

The bass player ignores the request. Near the end of the song, the drummer becomes more insistent.


If you listen if you listen you might hear
Do you get it?


Bass player continues to ignore. Finally the drummer says, Fuck it! I'm going to swing! Too bad. The song is over.

The pleasure's in the moment
But the moment has passed
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on February 29, 2024, 03:05:27 AM
You got it Ted. Was very deliberate on my part.
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: thetworegs on March 03, 2024, 09:10:24 AM
loving that bass great lyric and delivery throughly enjoyed
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: kenny mac on March 11, 2024, 02:49:13 AM
Drums are good on this, guitar gives out blue nicely vibes.
Like the harmonies.
Nice one.
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Ron D Bowes on March 12, 2024, 05:23:13 AM
Clever lyrics. I always say if I have to explain it it's no longer funny! Nice easy going song. I enjoyed it.
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Farrell Jackson on March 12, 2024, 09:07:37 AM
A cool, calm and gentle song Jim. Everything fits together well. Congrats. on getting the final song for the album done!
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: cuthbert on March 12, 2024, 11:21:56 AM
Maybe a simple story, but you make it sound lush.

Some Hooky (New Order-era)-style bass there - I always love that.
Title: Re: Do You Get It by Oldrottenhead
Post by: SE on March 14, 2024, 08:31:16 AM
Classic ORH, excellent lyrics and vocal, expect no less, an really enjoyable listen!!
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 16, 2024, 05:57:06 AM
Album now available at Spotify https://open.spotify.com/album/1p53SHzXSemcTf4wXIMsI7?si=q4-PkaKxRRqLtlh7jEop_g