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Title: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: StephenM on February 15, 2024, 05:51:26 AM
I sent Tim a music track that I thought would go perfect with his voice.  I am impressed with his lyrics (in this case quite deep imo) and vocals.  He has his very own style like no other I can think of and that is powerful.

I thought of adding some more stuff, especially at the end, but I think it is good as is... the drum voice breakdown at the end with the effects is good.

Tim did the voice and mix into the music and I thought it is really fine so I did not tweak this further. 

Thanks Tim for turning this into some real goodness.

I need to start keeping better notes as I can't remember which guitars etc... I know this was either the HB or the Epi nighthawk...
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: Ron D Bowes on February 15, 2024, 06:07:49 AM
I like the way it moves between dark and lighter delivery. Cool composition and great vocals.
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: Farrell Jackson on February 15, 2024, 07:24:42 AM
A great collaboration Stephen and Tim! I like the overdrive on the guitars. Tim's vocals fit perfectly!
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: thetworegs on February 15, 2024, 08:23:51 AM
an excellent collab Steve Tim's vocal fits great with the backer Bravo!
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: kenny mac on February 15, 2024, 09:07:13 AM
Yup I think it's better as it is ,the vocals fit the mood perfectly.
The guitars also set the tone nicely.
Cool one guys.
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: Ray Brookes on February 15, 2024, 01:02:22 PM
Cool collab from you two and a great song. Everything working so well - Tim's vocal and that nicely created backing.
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: TPB on February 15, 2024, 06:32:04 PM
Thanks Steve for letting me play with this always a pleasure and really thought the backer was cool
Always fun to play with others
V/R Tim
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on February 17, 2024, 04:06:06 AM
Another brilliant collaboration Stephen. I like the laid back style of this, music is great. Tim has really wrote some cracking lyrics. His vocals are smooth as silk. Love this.
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: Zoltan on February 18, 2024, 03:30:19 PM
Dark and moody. Authentic in both content and delivery.

I really like the way the song alternates between the darker vibe and the glimmer of hope.

Wonderful vocals and Stephen really goes to town with that rhythm guitar playing.

Last but not least. Let's give a hand to the bass player and drummer too.

What a song. What a group.
Title: Re: Make Up Your Mind (TPB and Stephen Colab)
Post by: Pete C on February 19, 2024, 12:56:33 PM
Some nice guitar work on the backer and Tim's vocals fit perfectly. Great job !

Pete