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Title: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: thetworegs on February 14, 2024, 08:58:15 AM
Valentine (banner image missing)


I'm feeling pretty lovey lovey today so here's one for the valentine fest....and my RPM Challenge album

Lady you got something that I need
Don't close the door cause I'm pretty sure its been decreed
That you've got love I could set free
If we talk I'm sure you'll agree
That we could be just you me
Theres something about the way you make me feel
You bring out the sunshine after the rain
I love the way you make me feel
You've entered in my dream
Theres something about you lady
the way you make me feel

Here we are in the moonlight realm
Dancing hand in hand
I'm under your spell
I've got nothing left to give that you can't find
but there something in you thats mighty fine
This feeling I have inside
is sending me right on out of my mind
Cause I love
Oh I love the way you make feel
Love the wayYou make me feel
You have entered into my dreams
You are with me in my dreams
Theres something about you lady
Theres something about the way
you make me feel
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: Geir on February 14, 2024, 11:55:38 AM
Oh yeah. This is lovely.

Smooth jazzy tune delivered with a smooth rocky voice.

What's not to like
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: hardlock on February 14, 2024, 03:40:39 PM
I like this one a lot! Lots of feel and good vibrations! 8)
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: Farrell Jackson on February 15, 2024, 07:33:13 AM
I'm liking this jazzy Valentine's Day song, Trevor! The piano is a cool addition. Your bit of gritty voice goes well with those jazzy chords. Nicely done!
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: StephenM on February 15, 2024, 08:11:38 PM
that piano sounds amazing through my current speaker set up... and the guitar too... i have a wall of sound again... i would not use this as a general rule.. but I do like to change things up once in a while.

this is so sultry and perfect for the V day... you'd score alot with this one... like a footballer with blue balls on friday night scoring so many goals in the tournament that the problem mysteriously disappears like blue lake water when it is poured into a cup is clear.
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on February 17, 2024, 04:09:35 AM
Smooth, jazzy Valentine's Day song trev. Love the acoustic and those piano Melodie's. Great vocals, quite laid back for you in fact, but smooth as silk.
Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: Ted on February 18, 2024, 12:47:22 PM
Sounds like sexytime music for a certain Sheffield ram.

Title: Re: Theres something about the way you make me feel
Post by: Pete C on February 19, 2024, 12:53:12 PM
Smooth and Jazzy ! Hope it had the desired effect  ;)

Pete