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Title: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on January 21, 2024, 11:50:42 AM
     
  Hold onto the Mystery

See them all fall down... as they hit the ground
See them all fall down... as they roll around
Accelerating hard towards the...
That very, very final lesson
They're killing off all their demons
But their angels will die too

If there is a God... He don't sit with me
Don't try too hard...hold onto mystery...
(INST)

And if you walk outside... In the sunshine bright
And if you walk outside...you never know you might
 
See there is a God...and it sits with me
Don't try too hard...hold onto mystery...
(INST)

Hold, hold on...hold, hold on...hold, hold on

Lyrics: Kallen@2024

Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: Mike_S on January 21, 2024, 03:39:12 PM
Been a while... I've kinda been hibernating :) this is my first listen to SC for a while and the those first 3 intro chords were a big nice welcome back to me. Really original piece. loads of tension but loads of melody and some lovely gritty guitar too. Excellent lads.

Mike
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: StephenM on January 21, 2024, 06:59:38 PM
this might be the finest thing of yours I ever heard Darren!  All your stuff is great but you keep getting the mixes better and better... you know what you are doing... and you make those musicians and singers sound just like the pro's they are!  killer man... the lead man this thing smokes
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: Ray Brookes on January 21, 2024, 09:49:16 PM
Your creativity knows no bounds, Darren. Another great track with everything spot on. Keith's vocals and that lead guitar work is just excellent. Well done to you both.
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: Trist on January 22, 2024, 05:13:06 AM
Cool song guys, like the melody lick line on the guitar, and  the feel shape of the song, excellent vocals and arrangement really different all sounds great, and good title that macthes the mysterious feeling the music conveys
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: Bluesberry on January 22, 2024, 11:33:02 AM
Excellent song ....love the lyrics.....love them....music is very good.....nice and understated...just what the song needed.......topping the pops with this one.....love those guitar breaks.....love it....one of the best from 2024.....total pleasure
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: godinqc on January 22, 2024, 01:51:48 PM
Cool song .. I really liked the song structure/chord change .. Vocals and guitars were also great.
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: StephenM on January 22, 2024, 02:07:30 PM
keep coming back to this for more and more and more... this recording is so great!

the drums kick major butt too... the leads though... man alive
Title: Re: Hold On To Mystery
Post by: Pete C on January 23, 2024, 04:23:21 AM
This is really growing on me after a few listens - nice original sound, well structured song.

Pete