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Title: You Want It Darker
Post by: Zoltan on January 20, 2024, 01:03:24 PM
A quick one. I think the first demo vocs work better because of the timing that leaves more space for the playing.



Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Zoltan on January 20, 2024, 01:04:21 PM
The more "refined" vocs.
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: StephenM on January 20, 2024, 01:06:08 PM
the lights are going out...

this actually reminds me of Hendrix vocally, music kind of...

lots of crazy swirly madness pinning the hard underbelly...

give this man an agent and get him out on world tour... sure would be better than seeing the Nursing Stones... lol...
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: StephenM on January 20, 2024, 01:08:37 PM
rainbows and reindeers...

darker baby darker
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: godinqc on January 20, 2024, 02:12:23 PM
Great song, really enjoyed this .. it has a psychedelics vibe to it ..
Really liked the guitars, drums and bass, vocals were also great ..
Great work
 
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Johnbee on January 20, 2024, 03:03:09 PM
I was just watching the movie "The Doors" the other night and the lyrics and vocal style here remind me so much of Morrison (in a good way, of course).  ;)

 :) John B
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on January 21, 2024, 04:47:43 AM
The intro reminded me of Lennons " cold turkey" riff. Brilliant psychedelic - rock song. Has a bit of a clapton, Hendrix sound with the guitars too. Cool feel to it with great drums and vocals. Another great demo.
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Mike_S on January 21, 2024, 04:14:52 PM
Lovely 60's pych vibe and yeah a wee bit of the great Jimi in the vocal. I get that too. Very dark and intense. To me this feels like a live authentic kinda woodstocky thing. Yeah man, super stuff  8)

Mike
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Trist on January 22, 2024, 05:33:26 AM
Thought might be a cover of the leonard cohen song for a minute with hte title. dark and gritty song this  with some cool guitar . like that ending
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 22, 2024, 08:11:48 AM
Zoltan, this song makes me you as a child of the 60's sporting a head band with flowers in it! I have to agree with the other comments about you having a voice similar to Jim Morrison. I dig the Doors so that is a compliment. Great lead guitar riffing and that bass rocks it big time. I'm gonna end with "Far Out Man"!
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Bluesberry on January 22, 2024, 11:38:51 AM
A new grove for a new generation...a mirror held up to our sordid little world.....it's still wonderous...and beautiful to my ears
Title: Re: You Want It Darker
Post by: Pete C on January 23, 2024, 04:01:09 AM
Very cool..love the guitar work on this

Pete