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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on January 20, 2024, 04:46:04 AM

Title: Console me
Post by: thetworegs on January 20, 2024, 04:46:04 AM
Another that came very quickly while having a tinkle on the ivory's ...
I don't know what to say to console me
I don't know if I can
The words that were said have now been opened
There out in the air
There out in the air
Sticks and stones will hurt you
but words won't hurt you
Thats what the rhyme says but its not true
What you said
Cut me deep to the bone
The words won't leave me alone
They echo around me
I can not be consoled
I can not be consoled

A truth's been broken
Snapped in two
I don't think it will ever get mended
while I'm with you
while I'm with you


I don't know what to say to console me
I don't know if I can
The words that were said have now been opened
There out in the air
There out in the air
Title: Re: Console me
Post by: Ron D Bowes on January 20, 2024, 07:51:22 AM
Good job on this. Cool piano and well performed vocals. Two sad songs I've listened to a row now! :-o
Title: Re: Console me
Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 20, 2024, 10:18:30 AM
You've done some fine piano work here Trevor! Your relaxed vocal on top of the piano is perfect. A sad song but also a real beauty!
Title: Re: Console me
Post by: Mike_S on January 21, 2024, 04:41:52 PM
I do like the piano stuff you have been doing recently Trevor. They have their own feel to them. This is heavy stuff but another solid track. Enjoyed very much.

Mike
Title: Re: Console me
Post by: Pete C on January 22, 2024, 03:20:59 PM
Working my way through the latest songs list and this is the fourth Trev song tonight. Great piano again and vocal. 

Pete
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