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Title: Putting me down
Post by: TPB on January 19, 2024, 06:11:41 PM
Well one thing about cleaning out the studio I found a lot of old note pads with songs I had written never played or recorded so have plenty of material to play around with now. Got a little carried away with the bass
Plus this type of song reminds me of Steve playing
Tim
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: StephenM on January 19, 2024, 07:33:40 PM
too funny Tim... lol... this does cook... it is just a little sideways but that works for me... crazy way you weaved your vocals around the music and beat...  I really like the mix alot...

now that is synchronicity...

is that dogs barking?  wow... there are some crazy cool stuff in here... way awesome...

I am glad I am listening to this straight though...

the vocals are amazing
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: TPB on January 19, 2024, 08:25:35 PM
Steve the back ground noise is from a Lebenon diner I eat at just recorded everybody talking with my phone
Put it on the track added delay and reverb to get the effect thought it was kinda of cool
Tim     
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: thetworegs on January 20, 2024, 04:14:21 AM
The recording of the restaurant works a treat kinda of adds a craziness to the track giving it that Stephen vibe. The vocal sits nicely between the guitars and cuts through nice and clean. Its a good one Tim 
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: godinqc on January 20, 2024, 12:48:39 PM
Cool song .. really liked the drum beat and guitars ..
I agree it has a Stephen fell/vibe to it ..  ;D
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Mike_S on January 21, 2024, 04:52:39 PM
Yeah this has a wee nod to Steve I agree. This is freewheelin' all the way. Carefree but with a strong groove in that guitar holding it together. Great vocal too Tim, very strong.

Mike
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Zoltan on January 22, 2024, 09:10:22 AM
I think you put the freak on for this one :D The intro is weirdness personified yet it eventually turns into a TPB classic with Steven peeking thru the windows. Hopping up and down seeing if there are any snacks available, but the lebanese food is too weird for him...

Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Bluesberry on January 22, 2024, 11:42:15 AM
Very enjoyable listen....slightly brilliant...I can smell the Lebanese food from here...great job
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Pete C on January 22, 2024, 03:11:02 PM
Weird but it works !

Pete
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Ray Brookes on January 22, 2024, 03:51:58 PM
As Pete says, weird yet it works and definitely a nod to Steve in craziness. Great vocal performance and love those guitars.
Title: Re: Putting me down
Post by: Johnbee on January 22, 2024, 07:53:58 PM
Almost Zappa.  Love the background things going on ("huba huba" etc).  Your voice is interesting.

 :) John B