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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on January 16, 2024, 05:12:39 AM

Title: You moved my world
Post by: thetworegs on January 16, 2024, 05:12:39 AM
I was reminiscing meeting my wife for the first time and wrote this.....Hopefully its not too mushy The tele with an acoustic simulator on the Kemper and even tried a tiny bit of slide ...well three notes the organs were from the Logic Library
Lady you were made to move me
The way you walked with all that beauty
A head so strong it moved my world

You knew just what you wanted
The future didn't have you daunted
To that strength
I had to respond
   
I'd been burned a thousand  times
And Loneliness was on my mind
Till my eyes saw you enter the room
 
In your eyes only love and respect
A homeliness
A truth I didn't expect 

Break

When our eyes met something happened to me
I can't explain it
But I knew you were meant to be

My heart exploded
My heart came alive
My loneliness had gone I wanted you by my side

Those days of loneliness
They had gone
Now I had got you on my mind

Lady you were made to move me
The way you walked with all that beauty
A head so strong it moved my world

You knew just what you wanted
The future didn't have you daunted
To that strength
I had to respond

Break

Loneliness was on my mind
I'd been burned a thousand  times
Till my eyes saw you enter the room

In your eyes only love and respect
A homeliness
A truth I didn't expect 

Lady you were made to move me
The way you walked with all that beauty
A head so strong it moved my world
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on January 17, 2024, 04:38:02 AM
Brilliant song Trevor, im sure your wife will appreciate it.
Great music, the acoustic sounds good and I love the organs.
Kind of reminds me of a rod Stewart vibe.
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: StephenM on January 17, 2024, 06:21:19 AM
For me this feels more like Guns and Roses a little mellowed out.

awesome sentiment Trev and from your photos I have seen I see a very happy family!  Isn't love great?

well written... will the wife hear this? 

guitars sound great
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: TPB on January 17, 2024, 08:09:42 AM
Well love songs to the wife are always good and it shows respect to the one we love and susport us. I am sure this will bring a smile to her face and heart great song brother
Tim
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: Pete C on January 18, 2024, 03:10:50 AM
Good song Trev. Like DarrenG and Stephen M I'm also getting an early Rod Stewart and G'n'R vibe to this.

Pete
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: karl1171 on January 18, 2024, 03:22:32 AM
Definitely a Rod Stewart influence, I was thinking that before I started reading the comments - he's made millions singing mushy songs!

Good song, bit (more?) of bass guitar would make it even better I think.
Title: Re: You moved my world
Post by: SE on January 18, 2024, 05:25:12 PM
Cool rock stuff,really strong vocal with the vibrato keys and guitar which suit the tune, not too slushy, just cool, hope the missus, likes it too!
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