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Title: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: thetworegs on January 12, 2024, 09:45:50 AM
For all those who need a kick in the arse to get on with the year...
I don't know what day it is
i don't seem to care about a thing
Everything to me is in Black and white
Theres nothing making your bell ring
Theres not a thing

I'm  doing nothing for tomorrow
My life is standing still
I've  got no incentive
I've lost your self-will

I don't care
I  don't love
I  don't feel
I  have no emotion at all 
I'm stood here like a man  made of steel
I can see my ordeal

I've  got to lighten up
I've  got to wake up
life is passing you by
I've got to do something
Apart from sitting here
Sitting here and cry

Ive got to be  doing something for tomorrow
Instead of standing here still     


Ive got to be  doing something for tomorrow
Instead of standing here still     

I don't know what day its
but I'm going to find out for tomorrow
And stop this silly sorrow
stop this silly sorrow   
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: StephenM on January 13, 2024, 12:31:10 PM
cool tune and true for many, including me but only once in a while...

and I know from your pictures this ain't true for you...

this rocks though... to the stars and beyond... love your vocals and that crazy punk rock guitar

great scott man your guitar playing is taking off.
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: the physics teacher on January 14, 2024, 01:24:41 AM
Sunday morning still allone emtieing the dishwasher and listening to this.
A good start of the day.
Verry nice
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: Pete C on January 15, 2024, 03:05:08 AM
Thanks for kicking me up the arse Trev ! I tend to become very unproductive this time of year...I think if I was an animal I'd probably hibernate. Great song and it's made me realise I need to get back to some recording !

Pete
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: hardlock on February 05, 2024, 11:19:51 PM
Nice rocker! Dig the vocal processing. 8)
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: Johnbee on February 06, 2024, 04:56:59 PM
Great rocker for sure but the mastering volume seems a bit loud, especially on the guitar (might be my playback gear though).  Vocal effect works nice.

 :) John B
Title: Re: I'm gonna do something tomorrow
Post by: chapperz66 on February 07, 2024, 02:15:13 AM
Wow- this rocks!  I'm tempted to head bang - but maybe tomorrow.

Paul