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Title: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: allysonmarie on January 04, 2024, 07:23:25 PM
Every Single Moment Hurt.mp3

I haven't mastered the track yet, but sharing anyway. I've had a rough week and have this song to reflect the moment's frustration. Things have got to go up from here.

Haunted by the first.
Give more blood than it's worth.
A worried heartbeat set to burst,
And every single moment hurts.

Have mercy! Take the rest away.
Tomorrow need not know the shame.
How my days live for the night.
The ice to a carving knife.
And there's no safer place.
This world I can't take.

I know happier life died at my birth.
It's this unspoken pain I serve.
All along, gathering nerve to breathe the flames.
You watch me burn.

As settled ashes, I'll return.
The never here at all I've earned.
The unspoken pain I serve.
How every single moment hurt.

Every single moment hurt.
The never here at all...
never here at all I've earned.
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: launched on January 05, 2024, 12:37:45 AM
I love this! By the way you mastered the track,so good!
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: hardlock on January 05, 2024, 04:43:22 AM
Clean piano, great vocal to fine lyrics! Very nice composition. 8)
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Ron D Bowes on January 05, 2024, 08:03:58 AM
Great voice. High emotion in this one. Hope things improve, but at least you have music as an outlet. Cool composition.
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Pru on January 05, 2024, 01:20:15 PM
very emotive singing and captivating melody
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Johnbee on January 05, 2024, 02:48:55 PM
I love the emotion you put in your tunes.  Your voice is fabulous.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: StephenM on January 06, 2024, 05:43:31 AM
digging this one!  I have heard it 3 times so far!
I like the flow of the tempo... very very awesome
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Ray Brookes on January 06, 2024, 06:21:51 AM
A splendid composition full of emotion and well performed.
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 06, 2024, 10:55:16 AM
Your singing and piano playing are very good!
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: the physics teacher on January 07, 2024, 02:40:31 AM
What a good idea to share your rough exoerience in your music. And you did it so well.
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Post by: thetworegs on January 07, 2024, 04:43:10 AM
I've had jobs like that where every moment there hurts, I feel for you ... excellent track
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on January 07, 2024, 05:29:25 AM
Such a beautiful, but sad, song. Lovely piano playing and an amazing voice.
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Jarle on January 08, 2024, 12:48:07 PM
Nice performance.
Title: Re: Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice
Post by: Mike_S on January 11, 2024, 04:48:11 PM
This is a stunning performance...  You have a very fine voice and you've written a great song here. Dark times but they can inspire great art too. Excellent.

Mike