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Title: Take me to your Leader
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on December 19, 2023, 01:20:43 PM
We imagined what would happen if hostile aliens came to earth and asked to see our leader..er..what leader? we don't have one capable of dealing with it. haha.

Merry Christmas.

 

Take me to your Leader

We have travelled so far (We come a long, long way)
From the furthermost star (In the Milky Way)
But we mean you no harm (No we won't hurt you)
If you just give us what we need!

But you don't know what's right
Surrender or fight
You can rattle your tin
Until you give in!

TAKE US TO YOUR LEADER...WE NEED A LEADER TO SAVE US
NEED A LEADER...WE NEED A LEADER RIGHT NOW  (x2)

(Inst Break)

You see our planet's gone cold (from our dying sun)
And our water's been sold (And all our food has gone)
Please just give us your young (Because we're so hungry)
For us all to feed upon!

Take us... to your leader...right now
(CHORUS)

Lyrics: Deegee&Kallen@2023
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: StephenM on December 19, 2023, 01:46:32 PM
ok and please take them with you... all of them

kick ass track men...kick ass

this restores my faith in rock music..

killer
the guitars are so darned great
the vocals are the best in a sea of great sounds
really pro stuff too as far as production
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: hardlock on December 19, 2023, 10:17:36 PM
I see a concert hall with a wall of marshals amps. 8) Great power rocker!
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: thetworegs on December 20, 2023, 02:33:15 AM
An excellent rocker love the tone on that guitar great vocal...I'd take you to my leader if I had one I just wander aimlessly
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Blooby on December 20, 2023, 06:43:18 AM

Cool tones and arrangement. The sentiment is spot on. Cool break and I really dig the poppiness of the chorus. Big tune. Big ending. Loved it.

Blooby

Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Farrell Jackson on December 20, 2023, 08:31:12 AM
One of the best pop rockers that I've heard in a long while! Great vocals, guitars, bass, and drums and all mixed perfectly. A top notch song and production! I'm gonna give it another listen because I'm sure I missed something...fun, fun, fun!
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: allysonmarie on December 20, 2023, 07:59:34 PM
Great song you've put together. The idea behind these lyrics and your ideas really left me spinning in my own thoughts after I listened about if / when that ever happened...lol 
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Geir on December 21, 2023, 04:45:37 AM
This is fabulous

Love the melodic guitar fills ... hell ... the whole guitar arrangement is great.

And the voices are equally excellent in their arrangement and execution.

And that catchy chorus!!! Wow


It's a hit!!!


Well done.


This should be song number two on a concept album


Will we get it all?
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Jarle on December 21, 2023, 06:28:28 AM
Great rocker with some really nice guitar and vocal arrangements.
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Ray Brookes on December 21, 2023, 04:44:02 PM
Bravo guys. A superb track with excellent production/arranging and stellar vocals and guitar work. This has to be one of your best yet, Darren which is saying a lot considering your high standard. As for the lyrics - I think if aliens did land on Earth they'd take one look around then clear off back to Pluto or wherever. 
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Johnbee on December 21, 2023, 06:39:57 PM
Some really great effects and guitar & vocal work.

:) John B
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: Bluesberry on December 21, 2023, 07:51:59 PM
Damn good lads......damn good....guitars are so tasty... like buttered toast.....fantastic song
Title: Re: Take me to your Leader
Post by: BerryPatch on December 29, 2023, 10:57:09 AM
Great, quirky rocker! So many great riffs here and that chorus is killer. Great vocals and excellent production.