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Title: Story of my life
Post by: TPB on November 14, 2023, 08:31:40 PM
Trying to knock all the rust and timing off  anyway it is what it is couple guitar tracks and all the rest of the kitchen sink. it is slowly coming back and it is good to play again
Tim[url="https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=195590;type=preview;file"]story.mp3[/url]

They say that lifes a hill and you have to climb to the top

Then it's a down hill slide till the bottom where you stop

There is many high and lows on this journey to be seen

Some will be forgotten and anothers saved in your memories

It's a journey that everyone everyone must take

It's a terminal condition that your destined to make

 

The story of my life iis written on my face

All those lines and wrinkles all have stories in their place

Well the stories of your life are just pictures in time

Your dreams are now just memories of a life that's gone by

Sometimes the road was steep and narrow I could barely get by

Othertimes it was down hill run and I felt so high

 

There was a time in my life I could not wait to get old

I was just young fool  and feeling very bold

Now that I am older I wish for younger days

No matter where your at life at is at it is just fading away

Now I see my future and know I am close to end

I am thinking of the good memories and all my friends

 

The story of my life iis written on my face

All those lines and wrinkles all have stories in their place

Well the stories of your life are just pictures in time

Your dreams are now just memories of a life that's gone by

Sometimes the road was steep and narrow I could barely get by

Othertimes it was down hill run and I felt so high
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 15, 2023, 06:44:39 AM
Tim, the MP3 file didn't load for some reason? I'll check back later.
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Zoltan on November 15, 2023, 07:11:11 AM
TPB as much as i'd like to think that this was intentional... I doubt that your story of life would start with the words "Error: no mp3 file found".

I shall revisit this post later. Maybe it will change into "Error: no LP found" and i would have easier time to believe that's the case.
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: TPB on November 17, 2023, 06:12:50 PM
Ok got it loaded
tim
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Bluesberry on November 17, 2023, 07:00:03 PM
Killer chorus........first off......love that.........good recording for knocking the rust off...and a very excellent song......great lyrics and singing........really well done....get another one done up.....you just need a little guitar solo to finish it off in fine style......... 8)
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: StephenM on November 18, 2023, 02:49:20 PM
it kicked off a bit weird timing as you said but man alive Tim, the lyrics alone make this a great song... it is loaded with wisdom.  This is like reading a modern version of Ecclisiastes. 
The music fits like a T...

thanks for sharing this Tim.  I know this is from the heart and that makes this about as good a song as I have ever heard!
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Zoltan on November 18, 2023, 04:16:25 PM
Tim those are some might fine lyrics.

The song is quite upbeat and vibey which works as a great contrast to the lyrics.
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 19, 2023, 07:13:27 AM
I'm glad you got it to load. Great lyrics Tim! A lot of us can relate to your words. Cool vocals and a wonderful chorus. I dig that rhythm guitar. A good one!
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Geir on November 19, 2023, 03:55:13 PM
Excellent lyrics Tim. Very relatable.

Catchy song as well.  And a great production


Well done!
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: Ray Brookes on November 20, 2023, 11:56:33 AM
Glad you got this loaded, Tim. Great Dylan-esque lyrics and well performed song.
Title: Re: Story of my life
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on November 21, 2023, 04:21:28 AM
Really good song Tim. Great lyrics,
I like the music and style a lot.