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Title: Hobo blues
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on November 12, 2023, 08:39:00 AM
This is just an instrumental/ demo kind of track at the moment. i have some possible ideas of where to go with lyric, maybe..either that or i'll can it.
I was was messing around one day with he guitar and pro logic x.  Just thought i'd post the music for now.

Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Ray Brookes on November 12, 2023, 11:21:40 AM
Well the basics are there, Darren for a good rockin' song. Just needs some lyrics and Keith's vocal to ice the cake. Cool guitar work BTW. A track in its embryonic state like this just lets the imagination run rampant so the possibilities are endless as to where to take the song. Looking forward to hearing the final result.
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: StephenM on November 13, 2023, 05:02:01 AM
hey man, this is metal blues... that guitar is razors edge sounding... I dig it.. don't you just love all the ways guitars can sound amazing.. this is a bit different for you, although you have a very wide creative bone musically Darren. 
This feels like a modern Zep

sure thing this could use some Rob Haleford singing on this!  lol..
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Blooby on November 13, 2023, 09:21:16 AM

Please have the word "Valhalla" somewhere in the finished version.

Hand claps and cowbell? You are a madman.

Blooby
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on November 13, 2023, 10:41:38 AM
Quote from: Blooby on November 13, 2023, 09:21:16 AMPlease have the word "Valhalla" somewhere in the finished version.

Hand claps and cowbell? You are a madman.

Blooby

Haha..ok..and I'll make sure they won't be handclaps/ cowbell in the finished version.  :)
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Bluesberry on November 13, 2023, 11:18:24 AM
It's a stunner of a groove........a little proggy a little metal....a tad swampy blues.....it has the lot...very tasty
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Blooby on November 13, 2023, 04:08:24 PM
Quote from: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on November 13, 2023, 10:41:38 AMI'll make sure they won't be handclaps/ cowbell in the finished version.  :)

Oh good gracious, don't you dare remove them! I am a child of the 70's (and SNL). More cowbell!

Blooby

Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Johnbee on November 13, 2023, 07:22:10 PM
Just needs lyrics.  Instant hit!

 :) John B
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: hardlock on November 13, 2023, 11:51:31 PM
Yeah - Rock On!  !@005
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Trist on November 14, 2023, 06:56:07 AM
Sounding good Darren, look forward to the track with vocals, some desperate fun gritty vocals and some harmonica and this will rock. sounds great in instrumental form and great production
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: TPB on November 14, 2023, 06:58:28 AM
Hard to drink my coffee with my head bobbing lol
Tim
Title: Re: Hobo blues
Post by: Ron D Bowes on November 14, 2023, 07:55:18 PM
Nice 'n' 'eavy!! Great driving groove! Has tons of potential! Well done Darren!