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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on November 11, 2023, 08:43:17 AM

Title: Come on Home
Post by: thetworegs on November 11, 2023, 08:43:17 AM
I was having a strum this afternoon and came up with this one ...thanks for listening .....I'm out this evening to go and see Robert Plant  in Salford at the Lowry, Should be a good night. I'm looking forward to it
Your trying to tell me that this love ain't real
Then what in the hell is this I feel
The love of my life has sprung out her cage
She's flying away
Oh far away
I don't really know what to say
But  life is going crazy

Come on baby come home
Come on you know you want be home
Where the love is real and the the lights are low
So come on babe come back home
Oh baby
come back home

I didn't mean a word I said
All that fire was pure zest
I was just acting crazy
you know I love you lady

Your trying to tell me this  love ain't real
Then what the hell  is this I feel
The love of my life has sprung out her cage
She's flown out
Oh far away
I don't know really what to say
My life has gone crazy

Come on baby come home
Come on you know you want be home
Where the love is real and the the lights are low
Come on baby
come back home
Oh baby
come back home

You can trust the words this is no speal
This love I feel is so real
I want to hold close to my heart
Hold you tight after you get home
Come on home
You know you want to be home
Where the love is real and the lights are low
Baby
Come on home


Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: Farrell Jackson on November 11, 2023, 10:10:21 AM
A real good strumming session that strummed up a good song! I like the bluesy rock vocal and words. Have a good time at Mr. Plant's show, Trevor! I wish I could go but the pond is just too wide. You'll have to give a short review of it.
Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on November 12, 2023, 05:58:04 AM
Another good song Trevor. Very nice strumming. It sounds like a song Robert plant would sing actually.
I hope you enjoyed the concert.  :)
Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: Ron D Bowes on November 12, 2023, 08:33:20 AM
Nice strumming. I like the vocal performance. Good solid song Trevor.
Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: Ray Brookes on November 12, 2023, 11:26:54 AM
Cool song, Trev and that vocal works great. How was the concert?
Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: Bluesberry on November 13, 2023, 11:25:33 AM
Superb man......superb........if I didn't know better I'd say you had old Mr.Plant stop off at your place and did this vocal......down in the cellar.........superb
Title: Re: Come on Home
Post by: Pete C on November 14, 2023, 02:36:05 PM
Great song Trev, enjoyed that !

Pete
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