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Title: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: ODH on November 04, 2023, 05:49:26 AM
The Five is because of the 5:4 timing and the Onions is because it has a little of the Booker T Green Onions vibe, imho.

Began life as a uke noodle. The sax is an Apple loop.

Truth be told this has been around ages unfinished, I topped and tailed it for the fest.
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: StephenM on November 04, 2023, 05:38:16 PM
It's clever, catchy, and very good... I like the time sig as well...the instruments sound really good... a nice track to get lost in
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: Zoltan on November 05, 2023, 04:07:27 AM
What is this? :) It started out fairly innocuously and then it started piling on the quirkiness! The money shot comes at the 90 seconds mark.

Booker T. at their most childish (in a positive way!). Brilliant stuff! So playful!
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: Pete C on November 05, 2023, 12:14:46 PM
Nice fun track Nick. Love how it stops and starts...like a stopping and starting thing.Some nice sounds !

Pete
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Post by: hardlock on November 06, 2023, 11:13:08 PM
Fun song! Enjoyed the listen. 8)
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Post by: Bluesberry on November 07, 2023, 10:44:47 AM
What's not to like......nothing.......love it
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Post by: Ray Brookes on November 08, 2023, 12:22:43 PM
Love that off kilter 5/4 timing. Cool fun track - love to see people try and dance to this.
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: thetworegs on November 09, 2023, 01:51:57 AM
Loving the off kilter beat too a little like walking home from the pub on a Saturday night excellent track totally of the wall just where I like it to be
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: Mike_S on November 09, 2023, 04:04:31 PM
Great work Nick. It's a really strange mix of old school jazz and then just some out there whacky ideas thrown into the mix. Would like to see this in a weird mind bending movie.

Mike
Title: Re: Five Onions : ODH Original
Post by: karl1171 on November 16, 2023, 02:26:04 AM
Its a catchy tune, I like it  :)

The Sax and key change are great ideas and keep it interesting