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Title: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on November 03, 2023, 02:31:29 PM
A wee two chorder,just guitars, bass and drums, though I have a sneaky feeling I've used this tune and melody before. got a bit of a cold, so excuse my vocals, sinuses giving me severe gyp and had to sing with tissue paper stuffed up my nose. Too much information?

It is what it is.
You never know till it's happening
By then it's too late
Be the calm in the eye of the storm
A safe pair of hands
Electricity
Ground yourself
Be where you have to be
To make it all right
Let it out
Just let it all out
One minute it's all okay
And then it's a riot
You know what you have to do
To bring it back down
Electricity
Reveal yourself
Peace love
Self awareness
Let it out
Just let it all out
You've been here before
You'll be here again
You'll be here
Cos you're not going anywhere
Electricity
Just be yourself
They know you're there for them
If nothing else
Let it out
Just let it all out
Who knows if
And who knows when
Just know this
We'll keep on trying
Electricity
Never give up
Electricity
The power of love
Let it out
Just let it all out
Electricity (Let It Out)
W/M
Oldrottenhead
GarageBand Drums
HB Bass Guitar
Fender Telecaster Guitar
And
Vocals
Title: Re: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: cuthbert on November 03, 2023, 02:40:51 PM
For a second there, I thought you were channeling the Captain with that title...

Very good use of two chords, and I wouldn't have even noticed the sinus issue if you hadn't mentioned it. Are there also some synthumsizerers in the mix?

Nice, chilled vibe!
Title: Re: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on November 03, 2023, 02:57:34 PM
Quote from: cuthbert on November 03, 2023, 02:40:51 PMFor a second there, I thought you were channeling the Captain with that title...

Very good use of two chords, and I wouldn't have even noticed the sinus issue if you hadn't mentioned it. Are there also some synthumsizerers in the mix?

Nice, chilled vibe!
no synthesizers just guitars. And the word electricity was stolen from the good captain but also the national use it on their song Ice Machines so channeling both songs. is a great word the way they both use it.
Title: Re: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: StephenM on November 03, 2023, 02:59:41 PM
the bass sounds great... it is a very nice vibe for sure...

vocals sound great

swirling good
Title: Re: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: SE on November 03, 2023, 08:12:45 PM
This is cool cause I love the lyrics and performance that make a cool song , I'm in the middle of a flat spell, but loving your able to write.
Title: Re: Electricity (Let It Out) by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Mike_S on November 09, 2023, 03:48:10 PM
Quote from: StephenM on November 03, 2023, 02:59:41 PMthe bass sounds great... it is a very nice vibe for sure...

vocals sound great

swirling good

Bass is great. It's a lovely chill out. Doesn't need any more than those 2 great chords.

Mike