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Title: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Ray Brookes on October 27, 2023, 06:35:27 PM
A little piece of gold
Always slipping from your hands
And now the shifting sands
You starting to get old
Grasping for that little piece of gold.

A little piece of gold
Looking for that point of reference
Ride the punches; ride the malevolence
You know you're bought and sold
For that little piece of gold.

That little piece of gold
What exactly would you do
It's never up to you
Just do what you are told
For that little piece of gold.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Ray Brookes on October 27, 2023, 06:38:48 PM
Worked this time.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: thetworegs on October 28, 2023, 02:09:19 AM
It certainly did a little piece of gold
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Farrell Jackson on October 28, 2023, 08:37:23 AM
Ray, I like how you start this out in the mellow lane and then gradually heavy it up as it moves into electric dark land and then back. Excellent vocals, story, piano and guitar! The fretless (?) bass sounds cool as it makes that lovely mwah sound. I enjoyed it all!
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: BerryPatch on October 28, 2023, 01:27:22 PM
Great dynamics here Ray! I totally wasn't expecting the track to get to that heavy middle section like that. Great soloing and the structure of this song is fascinating and totally works. Great lyrics here too; pure poetry.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: hardlock on October 29, 2023, 01:59:17 AM
Masterful performance and song writing. Outstanding in every sense. Ultimate contrasting with that off the chart solo and style change! 8)
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on October 29, 2023, 04:01:22 AM
Hi Ray, what an awesome song. Epic. I love the slow, mellow overall feel of the song, but love the change in style when it gets heavier. A bit Floyd-esq. great playing songwriting and singing.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Trist on October 29, 2023, 04:58:34 AM
good song title, liked the sparse sections and the arrangment into the heavy part before it breakdowns with a the more sader section with the piano and vocal style, real nice track, very haunting that ending, enjoyed this Ray
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Redler on October 29, 2023, 12:00:26 PM
Stunning job with different 'genres' in three minutes!! So enjoyable listening.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: karl1171 on October 30, 2023, 05:12:35 AM
Great production. I was reading the comments as it was playing and saw 'heavy middle section', so wasn't quite as much of a surprise. It works realy well. I was hoping it might make a bit of a reprise at the end though  :) .
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Zoltan on October 30, 2023, 06:39:32 AM
The song is just that. Evocative. That grungy middle section with fiddly bits was an interesting addition.

Kinda makes me wonder whether you should just release the inner beast and go full on rock for a while? I mean there's been shades of harder edged music in your compositions before.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: StephenM on November 03, 2023, 01:07:36 PM
woah, man this is beyond expression good!  I just bask in the goodness of it... and then that blistering guitar oh my goodness man... that is so wicked cool!  I dig it!  as great as you are Ray in all aspects... and everything is amazing... playing, production... your vocals top everything, pretty much every time... amazing
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Ron D Bowes on November 05, 2023, 09:59:16 AM
Nother fine piece by the troubadour himslef. The middle section hit me like a hammer. Shouldn't work but it does! Nice one Ray.
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Mike_S on November 05, 2023, 04:54:09 PM
Quote from: StephenM on November 03, 2023, 01:07:36 PMyour vocals top everything, pretty much every time... amazing

It's an underlooked thing I think sometimes in music. Why one band is 'great' and another is just 'good'. I think that is why Rory Gallagher is seen as a great of blues rock, but yet they don't often mention his vocals. I takes music another 10/20% to a better place.

Ray, another lovely piece. It is a lovely vocal with a spotlight shining on it - great reverb/echo? Great lyrics too. And yeah, letting rip in the middle... why not? Sounds great.

Mike
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Bluesberry on November 06, 2023, 12:09:46 PM
Brilliant arrangement....fantastic song....wonderful...really wonderful
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: bruno on November 06, 2023, 02:20:00 PM
Great tune and masterful performance all around. Wow
b
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Johnbee on November 06, 2023, 06:19:54 PM
Beautiful, Ray.  Love the changes in feel from acoustic guitar to heavy electric to an exquisite piano finish.  Brilliant.

 :) John B
Title: Re: That Little Piece Of Gold (retry)
Post by: Blooby on November 06, 2023, 06:42:53 PM

Quite the journey. Stellar songwriting and production.

 Blooby