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Title: Hellish Ride
Post by: Trist on October 25, 2023, 09:45:23 AM
Hereis my new one 01 - Tristyn Leach - Hellish Ride.mp3


Hi here [url="https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=195455;type=preview;file"]01 - Tristyn Leach - Hellish Ride.mp3[/url] is my new one

Moonlight and madness
I held the hand of sadness
As i wandered home alone
Pain rage and thunder
My world torn o sunder
Is it real that you're gone

All our hope took to flight
only to crash to the ground and die
All our hope took to flight
Only to fall from the eyes that cry
And this is one hellish ride

without you here by my side
Raindrops and sorrow
The promise of tomorrow
left with your last breath
Now i fight my way through the day
An I hold myself in the rain
And pray i will see you again

But all my hope takes to flight
only to crash to the ground and die
All my dreams take to flight
Only to fall from the eyes that cry
And this is one hellish ride
Without you here by my side

Now I turn your music up loud
And i try to make you proud
but i just don't know how

Cause my dreams  take to flight
only to crash to the ground and die
all my hope take to flight
only to fall from the eyes that cry
and this is one hellish ride
Without you here my side
Title: Re: Hellish Ride
Post by: Zoltan on October 25, 2023, 11:29:03 AM
Such a great song. The vocals are superb and i like the way the song unfolds. Gently strummed acoustic guitar and simple drum track are all that's needed here.
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Post by: Ray Brookes on October 25, 2023, 12:46:12 PM
Beautiful song, Tris. Great lyrics and the simple accompaniment works perfectly.
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Post by: StephenM on October 25, 2023, 04:51:20 PM
This is beyond good!  wow!  It is so beautiful and touching.  haunting... a great song that hits home to so many people. 

Thank you for such an amazing song
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Post by: thetworegs on October 26, 2023, 12:57:33 AM
Got a touch of Bob seger to your vocal ...love it ... excellent track
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on October 26, 2023, 08:19:00 AM
Tristyn, I heard this on another site and it's a killer ballad!
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Post by: Johnbee on October 26, 2023, 11:59:46 AM
Sometimes simplicity work best.  This is one excellent example. Sound effects work great.

 :) John B
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Post by: Trist on October 29, 2023, 04:39:08 AM
Thanks for the comments
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on October 29, 2023, 05:11:34 AM
Hi Tris, good to hear a new one. This is beautifully written and recorded. Bitter sweet lyrics. Nice playing, the acoustic sounds lovely.
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Post by: Redler on October 29, 2023, 12:08:14 PM
Another winner, Tristyn! Fine song...simple backer with great vocal melody. Enjoyable listening!