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Title: I see right through ya!
Post by: Pipes on October 16, 2023, 04:00:12 AM

Funkey damn and blasted type stuff
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Post by: Pete C on October 16, 2023, 02:15:32 PM
I love a funky bass line and this definitely has it. An unusual song but very addictive !

Pete
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Post by: Redler on October 17, 2023, 10:38:02 PM
Stunning job, Nick! Two basses match well together and your voice is icing on the cake. Great!
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on October 18, 2023, 07:53:58 AM
Those basses are real monsters! They are stealing the show. The octave vocals are cool!
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Post by: Zoltan on October 19, 2023, 02:46:27 AM
The soundtrack for the dark room, art gallery, or and exhibit of somekind. Probably with people wearing flamboyant costumes and being part of the new romantic movement.

Where designer drugs are in vogue and the latest thing has already become a fad. Blink and you'll miss it.

That's what i'm getting from this track. If the intention was to conjure images of ducks swimming in the bond i don't think you succeeded. Otherwise i'd say this odd duckling is a winner of a track! :)
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Post by: thetworegs on October 19, 2023, 05:26:40 AM
Those are some funky bass's loving it great vocal as always
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Post by: Blooby on October 19, 2023, 06:31:17 AM

I love how unapologetically original this is. Well done.

Blooby
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Post by: StephenM on October 23, 2023, 05:53:20 AM
this is very very original and very very good in my ears.  The vocals alone are awesome and the basses sound great.

what I do think would be cool would be a 15 to 30 second Blooby solo here somewhere.. but it is great as it is.

very original... percuss works a treat too