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Title: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: Mike_S on August 29, 2023, 02:24:19 PM
Been a while since posting anything... trying to find little pockets of time to do stuff not been easy but pieced this together over the last few weeks.

I had a riff I was messing with on acoustic for ages and kept chopping and changing how it went. Eventually formed it into this...

Anyway here it is...

You know that it's hard to understand
The world doesn't stop for any man
And you just see what you wanna see
If it fits in to your plan 

How did it all end up like this
Is what we're seeing even true
And if we could see what's real
Is there anything that we would do?

These days they try and tell you black is white
And I don't know who is wrong or who is right

And I'm dancing, yes I'm dancing
Dancing on the edge

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Solo

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Nothing is ever gonna change
If we don't try to change our ways
We only see one point of view
We can't see our own mistakes

These days they try and tell you black is white
And I don't know who is wrong or who is right

And I'm dancing, yes I'm dancing
And I'm dancing, yes I'm dancing
Dancing on the edge


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iyVy39EPeLo
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: Ray Brookes on August 29, 2023, 02:44:32 PM
Cool song, Mike. That drum intro sounds great - in fact the drumming throughout sounds great. I like the lyrics and the overall vibe of the song. That guitar entering at 1:50 works so well and your vocal suits the moody vibe of the song.
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: StephenM on August 29, 2023, 06:23:25 PM
Mike, you have no idea how big I smiled when I saw this!!!!   and man... I am dancing... I am dancing....

I love this... and I love you... because you hit me right in the heart with your music and I want to say thank you... thankyou for taking the time to make this wonderful heartfelt music... your music helps me in so many ways... it really does... even now listening to this I have tears flowing down my face...because for a long time now I have been losing so many people in my life, that I love and that I like.... you know?  The older we get the harder it gets...but... you nailed me... because between the tear drops (that God himself collects in a bottle) I dance... I am dancing... and I am dancing to your great and incredible music...

there is no music on this planet like yours... it doesn't exist...except right here.
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: Redler on August 30, 2023, 01:32:35 AM
Brilliant songwriting and performance!

Fine and dark vibe works well. Top class production, too!
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: SE on August 30, 2023, 04:02:43 PM
One of my faves from you Mike, this just project,s what ,many of what us are feeling, maybe I,m jumping the gun or projecting where I'm from.
Cool song, anyway, big respect!
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: kenny mac on August 31, 2023, 12:11:44 PM
That's an excellent track Mike,guitars sound great.
Getting an R.E.M vibe about it.
A very upbeat feel to it musically.
Cool lead as well.
Your vocal fits like a glove.
Lyrics tell it like it is .
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: des0free on September 01, 2023, 09:35:42 PM
This is really great. Like the guitar riff and especially the vocal delivery - has just the right amount of "toughness" and "edge" - you're really next level these days on the vocals. Agree with the comment about REM vibes. Great work.  Agree with StephenM that you've given us great, unique stuff. I really need to download and make a Mike_S  playlist. And go drive through some backcountry twisting roads with it blasting (in my minivan,..., uh,...I mean in my vintage sports car)
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: StephenM on September 02, 2023, 07:24:26 AM
Quote from: des0free on September 01, 2023, 09:35:42 PMThis is really great. Like the guitar riff and especially the vocal delivery - has just the right amount of "toughness" and "edge" - you're really next level these days on the vocals. Agree with the comment about REM vibes. Great work.  Agree with StephenM that you've given us great, unique stuff. I really need to download and make a Mike_S  playlist. And go drive through some backcountry twisting roads with it blasting (in my minivan,..., uh,...I mean in my vintage sports car)

yeah Doug, minivan or sports car rocking Mike S works!  Especially if you get on that California coast hiway... rocking some Irish great named Mike!  I would so love that!
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: Bluesberry on September 03, 2023, 09:08:27 AM
Spectacular man.....spit the words out.....there's a lot to be pissed off about these days...you captured that feeling perfectly........a protest song perhaps......
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: StephenM on September 04, 2023, 02:46:32 PM
I also really enjoyed watching the live version in the living quarters!  You are a beautiful man Mike and thank you for the glimpse of who you are.  Also, I was mesmerized with your chordings on the wonderful guitar sounds .... and of course your voice is great!  What a track!!!
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: godinqc on September 05, 2023, 05:35:02 PM
Great song, I agree it has a R.E.M vibe to it ..
The vocals and guitar playing are really good , also great lyrics.
Great work .
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on September 06, 2023, 02:05:32 AM
It is hard finding time to do everything these days. I'm glad you found time though Mike, to finish this , what a great song.
I watched the acoustic live version first..brilliant. Love your guitar, and just realised you're left handed.
The produced track is bloody great. Produced really well. The guitars and drums sound brilliant and I always love your lyrics and your voice.
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: karl1171 on September 07, 2023, 06:18:32 AM
I like this, its dark and moody with great vocals and drums. Production good too. I can see where people are coming from with the REM comparisons, but there's something else there too, can't put my finger on it at the moment...
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: the physics teacher on September 07, 2023, 06:53:31 AM
A great song mike loved listening to it and nice lyrics too.
Title: Re: Dancing On The Edge
Post by: Mike Huntingford on September 07, 2023, 10:50:42 PM
Mike fantastic song start to finish - all the right touches and a real edginess that makes it really standout. All instrumentation was spot on and your guitar playing is wonderful. Love the vocals Mike - very talented!

Mike