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Title: Carnal Tempest
Post by: Zoltan on July 21, 2023, 06:21:20 AM
Here's a weird little ditty...

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Carnal Tempest

V1
In the dark of night
temptation calls
Two girls desires
emotions enthrall
A fiery lust burning deep within
A tale of torrid passion where innocence is slain

Pre-chorus

The shadows whisper untamed desires
As they play with fire, their souls set afire

Chorus:

Carnal tempest, reckless and bold
Two girls, one guy,
a story seldom told
In the heat of passion

V2:
Their bodies entwined
In ecstasy
In a moments time
Just primal bliss

Carnal-Tempest.jpg
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: StephenM on July 21, 2023, 12:25:17 PM
I am rolling on the floor laughing...because this seems serious enough and it really on it's own is not at all funny... however when one has inside knowledge on the artist and then looks at the promo release and the lyrics it gets really funny and real fast...real funny fast...

is this the one that took you 5 minutes?  well either way this is great... and I like the backing vocals...
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: Ray Brookes on July 21, 2023, 12:58:43 PM
Cool song with a nice laid back vibe. Good vocal work and professional sounding production; mixed well. Who are the people in the photograph.
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: thetworegs on July 22, 2023, 04:03:20 AM
Liking that laid back vibe good story like the backing vocals nice touch
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: SE on July 22, 2023, 04:10:57 PM
Loving how you got your hair done before you got in the water, maybe you needed to cool down after all that heat in the night.😃😃
Great tune liked it lots!!
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: Bluesberry on July 27, 2023, 09:30:55 AM
I am loving this...quirky and saxy.......cheeky even.....perfect
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: Johnbee on July 27, 2023, 04:59:30 PM
Why on earth are they in the middle of a lake and not in a bedroom?! ;D
Seriously, great tune from start to finish.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Carnal Tempest
Post by: kenny mac on August 01, 2023, 09:33:00 AM
Nice one..very laid back vibe.
Alot of sounds in there you don't Normally use.
Cool sexy track