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Title: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: maxit on July 15, 2023, 09:29:41 AM
I would like to introduce the new acoustic combo ... Marcus, the upright bass kid that don't say a word but plays so fine, Mina, the redhead drummer, and the wonderful ladies of the string 4tet ... but no, that's just same old me and tim, as usual lol. Here's a new acoustic one. I was a bit touched when I got it finished from Greeny, that golden boy....

GOLDEN NOW

I felt the kiss of the rain
so cold, like a dead girl's mouth
but I hid it in shame:
don't want you to see me so down

so let me into your light
and we could be so golden now
in the depths of the fight
we could be so golden now

I'll change out of this suit -
this old suit of sorrow
let me into your light
and we could be so golden now

precious metals and sun
let me bask in your love

so let me into your light
and we could be so golden now
in the depths of the fight
we could be so golden now

I'll change out of this suit -
this old suit of sorrow
let me into your light
and we could be so golden now

precious metals and sun
let me bask in your love

and just for a while
we'll hold out the rainy day
so golden now
shining down in yellow rays
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: WarpCanada on July 15, 2023, 04:26:51 PM
This has some cool Lennon/McCartney vibes.

Great lyric.
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: StephenM on July 16, 2023, 06:30:44 AM
Beautiful backdrop of music scape for Tim's mazing voice and lyrics... the creativity of the lyricist never ceases to amaze me... I agree with Warren, it is Beatle esque or PMac for sure.

It's mellow mostly and defo melancholic which is lovely... and a really nice theme but a few of the lines made me sit up in my chair really straight and pay attention... RESPECT! 

Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Farrell Jackson on July 16, 2023, 07:29:31 AM
Simply lovely Maxit, Tim and a nod to Marcus and Mina :D. I like it all but the lines in the lyric "I'll change out of this suit - this old suit of sorrow" really stood out to me. Well done guys!
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Bluesberry on July 16, 2023, 10:26:20 AM
Holy moly this is special now isn't it....very special......golden like Greenys golden vocal.....incredible song gang...if music can transform this is one of those songs.....very special
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: kenny mac on July 16, 2023, 03:26:19 PM
Yes very beatleesque
A dreamy vocal and a lovely acoustic vibe.
Very upbeat and uplifting in its vibe.
Although the dead girls mouth line caught me a bit off guard
You two certainly make great music.
Fantastic guys.
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Blooby on July 16, 2023, 03:34:45 PM

This is a special post. Just achingly love!y touch on that acoustic, and Tim's contribution is just so perfect for this. Just wow.

Blooby

Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Bluesberry on July 16, 2023, 03:48:35 PM
Quote from: Blooby on July 16, 2023, 03:34:45 PMThis is a special post. Just achingly love!y touch on that acoustic, and Tim's contribution is just so perfect for this. Just wow.

Blooby


what he said....
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: BerryPatch on July 17, 2023, 08:14:41 AM
What a lyric! Beautiful acoustic chords and stellar recording quality. Great vocal from Greeny!
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: hardlock on July 17, 2023, 05:39:36 PM
Definitely a very special song! Flawlessly wonderful. 8)
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Mike_S on July 21, 2023, 04:25:15 PM
Quote from: Farrell Jackson on July 16, 2023, 07:29:31 AMSimply lovely Maxit, Tim and a nod to Marcus and Mina :D. I like it all but the lines in the lyric "I'll change out of this suit - this old suit of sorrow" really stood out to me. Well done guys!

really love the lyrics too... some lovely lines. But really just a great, warm uplifting tune. Lovely stuff guys.

Mike
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: thetworegs on July 22, 2023, 01:13:43 AM
Beautiful guitar setting the scene then Tim's beautiful vocal...just perfect ......a lost McCartney song
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Pipes on July 28, 2023, 06:06:37 AM
Beautiful chords and song structure

Super, super, melody. Harmonies are blissful

Congratulations guys

Grand lyrics too and singing is remarkable.

Golden days
Nick
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: Johnbee on July 28, 2023, 01:28:36 PM
Perfect song musically & lyrically.  Congrats.

 :) John B
Title: Re: Golden now (Maxit and Greeny)
Post by: launched on August 06, 2023, 07:21:39 AM
My post got wiped out but it was good as anybody else's! Fabulous tune, I love it. You all play very well together sounds magnificent.