Text only | Text with Images

Songcrafters.org

Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: Redler on July 05, 2023, 08:45:20 AM

Title: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Redler on July 05, 2023, 08:45:20 AM
Hi all!

Another summer song from us. Sunny Monday_Kari and Greeny.mp3


Sunny Monday

Wake up to the birdsong with the light fizzing through the blinds
Sunny Monday
Morning coffee and the slow moving hands of time
We'll take the long way

No work today for these idle hands
no work today, just sky and sand

No more hibernating through the winter days and nights
Sunny Monday
The diamond sparkle of the water in our eyes
Troubles far away

No work today for these idle hands
no work today, just sky and sand

No work today for these idle hands
no work today, just sky and sand

These days are golden like an icon so serene
Sunny Monday
Watch the shadows elongating by the sea
Until the light fades

No work today for these idle hands
no work today, just sky and sand
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Farrell Jackson on July 05, 2023, 10:07:54 AM
A very nice summer song Kari and Greeny! I was drinking my morning coffee as I listened and it was the perfect accompaniment. Excellent words, vocals and music!!!!
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: cuthbert on July 05, 2023, 03:21:56 PM
A sunny, jazz-tinged pop song from two very talented fellows. Perfect soundtrack for the late start of summer we're seeing in Maine today.
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Ray Brookes on July 05, 2023, 03:23:48 PM
Great summer track and expertly produced. Everything in the mix perfectly placed with just the right amount of space.
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: hardlock on July 05, 2023, 03:41:51 PM
Very nice tune. Great harmonies and vibe! 8)
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Blooby on July 05, 2023, 05:42:49 PM

Some very pleasing changes and melodies in there. I love that clean woody guitar tone doing the intermittent single note bits.  How did you go about getting it.

Lovely post.

Blooby
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: thetworegs on July 06, 2023, 01:02:38 AM
Excellent laid back vibe
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: maxit on July 06, 2023, 07:22:05 AM
Ciao Kari, how are you? Hey what a great song! I loved the line "No work today" (is it a hope or it's true lol ?)and the music say it wonderfully as well. Great one!!!
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: TPB on July 06, 2023, 07:39:49 AM
Smooth as silk and I love sunny mondays playing is crisp and the vocals are sublime
Tim
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Redler on July 06, 2023, 08:32:28 AM
Thanks for comments!

Quote from: maxit on July 06, 2023, 07:22:05 AMCiao Kari, how are you? Hey what a great song! I loved the line "No work today" (is it a hope or it's true lol ?)and the music say it wonderfully as well. Great one!!!

I'm fine and recovered 100 %. "No work today" is hope that came true. I quit my working career, still having a lots of holidays until November and that's it 😊
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: StephenM on July 06, 2023, 09:36:39 PM
Well gentleman this is top shelf and wonderful stuff.... in NC this could be called beach music and certainly the beach and summer go hand in hand.

Lovely guitars and vocals...
So glad Kari is making music with Tim!

Superb
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: maxit on July 07, 2023, 09:21:13 AM
Quote from: Redler on July 06, 2023, 08:32:28 AMThanks for comments!

Quote from: maxit on July 06, 2023, 07:22:05 AMCiao Kari, how are you? Hey what a great song! I loved the line "No work today" (is it a hope or it's true lol ?)and the music say it wonderfully as well. Great one!!!

I'm fine and recovered 100 %. "No work today" is hope that came true. I quit my working career, still having a lots of holidays until November and that's it 😊
I'm truly happy to hear that!
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: danieldesete on July 08, 2023, 03:15:24 AM
So many cool vibes in that song, great effort, thanks for sharing !
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on July 09, 2023, 03:37:55 AM
A great song guys. It has a nice feel good vibe to it. Love the music, lyrics and vocals
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Bluesberry on July 10, 2023, 09:04:57 AM
Wow........double WOW.....what a stunner song...well done lads...love the chords
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: kenny mac on July 10, 2023, 10:42:35 AM
This is so relaxing ,what an excellent vibe you guys have created.
The vocal washes over you like a calm wave and the music is just so laid back.
Great track.
Title: Re: Sunny Monday - by Greeny and Redler
Post by: Mike_S on July 13, 2023, 02:29:35 PM
The scene is painted so well with the music. Beautiful, really feels idyllic. And someone mentioned the production, really well produced, everything sits really well. Great stuff guys.

Mike
Text only | Text with Images