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Title: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Blooby on June 07, 2023, 09:56:50 PM

I was driving John crazy tonight with musical non sequiturs, but I think I rebounded. Props to John for a stellar vocal delivery and cool lyrics.

Blooby
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: thetworegs on June 08, 2023, 12:55:27 AM
Fab vocal John ..who is that man? Loving the flutters of guitar throughout
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Lurker on June 08, 2023, 05:44:32 AM
I have a few choice words for Bruce, but these I'll share with the rest of you.

The Man Upstairs

The man upstairs treads softly on my ceiling
Light footfalls barely make a sound
Is he trying not to be noticed
To find if I could forget he's about

The man upstairs seldom steps outside
I wonder what made him move away from the world
Did someone injure or offend him
Or is he just content to watch events unfurl

Who is the man upstairs
Should I try to know him do I dare
If I think about him does he care
Who is the man upstairs

The man upstairs views the world through his window
Looks out on the people as they pass him by
I wonder what he thinks as he watches
Does he gaze with indulgence or a critical eye

The man upstairs hears callers on the weekends
He rarely speaks that his voice is heard
So many are so loud with their praise and pleading
I wonder how they know when he utters a word

Who is the man upstairs
Should I try to know him do I dare
If I think about him does he care
Who is the man upstairs

The man upstairs seems to me to be lonely
In spite of the guests he indulges each week
I wonder how well they really know him
Have they overlooked his greatest need

The man upstairs treads softly on my ceiling
Does he recall that I am here
Could it be that I haven't noticed
Subtle signals throughout the years

Who is the man upstairs
Should I try to know him do I dare
If I think about him does he care
Who is the man upstairs
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: StephenM on June 09, 2023, 03:47:43 PM
this is a real home run... it's quite epic... sort of like Robin Trowers Bridge of Sighs... very different but also for me that incredible vacuum that sucks me right inside.....

cool and dreamy lyrics... and leaves one to wonder, a good thing....

the music is super.... the bass is so awesome... the guitars impress... but mostly this is a very lovely and soft piece by Blooby... one of the best I ever heard from this artist for me... and they are all quite great...
but this has a special feel... 

of course Lurkers voice is in the usual amazing form...
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Pete C on June 11, 2023, 03:25:13 PM
Love all the guitar work on this...makes it such an interesting listen. A very professional piece and the vocals are superb

Pete
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Oldrottenhead on June 11, 2023, 03:58:38 PM
first line is a belter. gaun yersel guys.
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Ted on June 12, 2023, 05:37:36 AM
Excellent and moody. The guitar interludes gently and briefly uplift and illuminate the otherwise dark scenery, as if to say "Lighten up. Your obsession with, and dark speculation about, the man upstairs kind of weird. The truth about him is quite benign, simple, and would probably disappoint you." 

What did you do for the drums on this?

Also...

Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: chapperz66 on June 13, 2023, 02:49:32 AM
What a fabulous song. Great guitars, stunning vocal and I particularly love the Farfisa-style organ appearing periodicaly.  Enigmatic lyrics are spot on for me.

Very, very accomplished all round.

Paul
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Farrell Jackson on June 16, 2023, 09:47:28 AM
First off, this is a cool song with excellent music and a top vocal/lyric! I dig all the little pieces that pop up throughout the song, mixed quietly but just enough to be heard. The clean guitar solo is another stand out moment. The bass is subdued but very present in the song. Nicely done Blooby and Lurker!
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Blooby on June 16, 2023, 06:04:57 PM
Quote from: Ted on June 12, 2023, 05:37:36 AMWhat did you do for the drums on this?

Also...



That video was very amusing. I took notes should I end up in a multi-story assisted living unit.

Still using Addictive Drums. I am a huge fan.

Thank you sincerely for listening.

Blooby
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: Ron D Bowes on June 17, 2023, 06:08:13 AM
Nice laid back track - cool use of effects and expertly delivered vox. Good job guys!
Title: Re: "The Man Upstairs" w/Lurker
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on June 17, 2023, 10:21:13 AM
A fantastic collaboration guys. Story for The lyrics are interesting. I like the jazzy style of the beat and percussion. Some nice touches of organs/ synths, the strummed flanged guitar sounds brilliant.
Brilliant vocals. It's a top song