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Title: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on May 20, 2023, 08:12:20 AM
Hi all, just hot off the press. Hope you enjoy.

Crafter 12 String, Fender Precision. Pads from GarageBand. Drums BR800

Every now and then when I'm just dreaming
My thoughts turn to you
When I said goodbye
You didn't scream you didn't cry
You just watched as I walked away
No tears to cry nothing to say

Did it hurt well, I'll never know
And if it did It didn't show
When I said goodbye
You didn't scream you didn't cry
You just watched as I walked away
No tears to cry nothing to say

It's too late to say I'm sorry
I didn't mean to hurt you that way
But I keep on thinking
And I guess there was no other way

Instrumental

Every now and then when I'm just dreaming
My thoughts turn to you
When I said goodbye
You didn't scream you didn't cry
You just watched as I walked away
No tears to cry nothing to say

Outro

Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: the physics teacher on May 20, 2023, 09:02:44 AM
Well I indeed enjoyed you singing lyrics and instrumental play.

Regards,

Corné de Boer
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: Farrell Jackson on May 20, 2023, 02:09:37 PM
Nicely done Willie! I love your familiar jingle, jangle 12 string. Tops on the vocals and the mellow lead break is done so smoothly. A winner!
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: StephenM on May 20, 2023, 02:52:32 PM
lots of loveliness... a real gem!  Really a hit parade you do Willie!
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: Bluesberry on May 20, 2023, 04:19:31 PM
That's what so great about this site......hearing beautiful songs like this right here.....lovely that's a great vocal melody...sweet solo.......it's a great song
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: godinqc on May 21, 2023, 09:34:59 AM
Really good production, great vocals and music arrangement.
Nicely done.
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: Zoltan on May 21, 2023, 02:49:13 PM
The Gobi always delivers. Another notch on the bed post.

Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: Mike_S on May 21, 2023, 03:48:32 PM
Another beauty Willie. Sometimes I feel like your songs have a kind of healing quality... a sad but lovely song.

Mike
Title: Re: When I Said Goodbye
Post by: Blooby on May 22, 2023, 07:44:07 AM

I truly enjoyed this one, but I believe your voice is competing a bit with the rhythm guitars. In fakrness, I am listening on a tablet, so that could be one my end.

You handle content is such a classy way. Given the same sentiment, I reckon anything I would compose along these lines would sound like a bad greeting card.

Beautiful tune.

Blooby

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