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Title: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Zoltan on December 15, 2022, 09:10:23 AM
Another Story Another Day

Another story
Another day
Another girl wasting away

Another dream got robbed
Another way
Another story wasting away

CH:
It can cut you like a knife
Breakdown all the barriers deep inside
It can make you turn inside
Breakdown all the barriers deep inside

V2:
Another story
Another day
Another girl wasting away

Another dream got wrong
Another way to fail
Another story wasting away

It can cut you like a knife
Breakdown all the barriers inside

LEAD

etc.

The guitars are combination of UAD Dream 65 (pushed with Overhive pedal) and Rockman x100. Left side guitars are Stratocaster (JB jr pickup and with a setup from hell!) and right side is Gibson SG. I sketched this quickly and then got carried away with polishing. Hence all kinds of weirdness happening and a mix that is a nightmare! :D





Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: StephenM on December 15, 2022, 04:36:04 PM
bloody hell this is!
Where did you come up with the story?  The guitars sound amazing and the lead is superb... That Un Authorized Device 65 sounds fab... and the rockman is always spectacular..  we need a time machine, we can get rich with this sound back in 1980...

vocals are very good and the mix is great and you are right lots of polish.

I am languishing in the 60's and 70's and you are a decade ahead of me!  If I were the jealous type I would be turning green right now and possibly hulking up mad...
but instead, I will clap and provide a standing ovation.... btw, what do you go in your spare time?
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: StephenM on December 16, 2022, 05:40:37 AM
oi tuo kitara on todella hyvä... osuu suoraan silmien väliin
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Ray Brookes on December 16, 2022, 12:36:26 PM
Oh yeah, great sound. Those guitars sound awesome and love the way the song drives along. Excellent mix/production and cool lyrics.
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Redler on December 17, 2022, 06:04:02 AM
Yes, very authentic 80's vibe on this! My toe started tapping on the floor right from the start.

Well done, Zoltan!
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: godinqc on December 17, 2022, 05:15:53 PM
Great 80's song .. I really liked the beat and guitars .. vocals were also really good ..
Great work .. Rock on .. !@004
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: hardlock on December 18, 2022, 02:34:14 AM
A driving force of rock & roll! Feel like I'm the front row of the concert! Great mix - great song!  8)
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Farrell Jackson on December 18, 2022, 08:48:25 AM
Oh yeah this is the eighties style that I like! It would fit right on an album with the song Maniac. Great vocals/lyric and the guitars are so cool...especially that Tom Scholze signature pick slide. Great tone on the guitars. Well done!
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: kenny mac on December 18, 2022, 01:47:59 PM
Right from the start this was a hit.
The clarity in that lead guitar is superb.
This could be right off a whitespace album.
I think I've mentioned this before  but you sound alot vocally like Geir on this site.
Superb track
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: StephenM on December 18, 2022, 04:15:22 PM
you're damn right I am in love with Zoltan music AND I DON'T GIVE A FLYING FORK WHO KNOWS IT!AND I DON'T GIVE A FLYING FORK WHO KNOWS IT!
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on December 19, 2022, 07:41:39 AM
Oh yeah..this rocks from the start and then all the way through. This is a seriously great song,
I think the best I've heard from you, or one of them.
It definitely has the 1980's feel. I can imagine this from one of those 80's American films.
The guitars are just brilliant and the vocals / lyrics. Great mix too.
Awesome song,
Darren
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Bluesberry on December 31, 2022, 05:58:28 PM
You had me at 80s pop rock......very cool......spandex bump
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: StephenM on January 01, 2023, 06:27:06 AM
This guy has more tricks in his bag of illusions than David Copperfield.  My goodness.  Listen to that guitar solo man...

and the drums... and to suck at singing as good as Zoltan does must be really tough... That lead hook though is very Loverboy! 

Illusions are real
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:25:54 AM
Quote from: kenny mac on December 18, 2022, 01:47:59 PMI think I've mentioned this before  but you sound alot vocally like Geir on this site.

Was thinking the same thing, but a good thing. This mix is really clean and pro, awesome guitars and bass groove. If I could assemble amazing panned riffs like that I would never leave the house and just do it all day long.

Really love this song!
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Bluesberry on January 01, 2023, 07:40:58 AM
Quote from: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:25:54 AMI would never leave the house and just do it all day long.
Wearing nothing but silky spandex of course.....who wouldn't want that kind of life
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:50:47 AM
Quote from: Bluesberry on January 01, 2023, 07:40:58 AM
Quote from: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:25:54 AMI would never leave the house and just do it all day long.
Wearing nothing but silky spandex of course.....who wouldn't want that kind of life

I had a grandiose reply but now I'm just saying - "Yup!"
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Bluesberry on January 01, 2023, 07:57:33 AM
Quote from: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:50:47 AMI had a grandiose reply but now I'm just saying - "Yup!"
When you are rocking spandex garments "yup" is all that is needed.....the rest is contained within that stretchy and yet confident fabric
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: launched on January 01, 2023, 08:15:59 AM
Quote from: Bluesberry on January 01, 2023, 07:57:33 AM
Quote from: launched on January 01, 2023, 07:50:47 AMI had a grandiose reply but now I'm just saying - "Yup!"
When you are rocking spandex garments "yup" is all that is needed.....the rest is contained within that stretchy and yet confident fabric

Stretchy and confident, do those words go together lol!
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: Frank53 on January 01, 2023, 08:27:22 AM
Well now, this rocks! Great riffage, and lots of power.
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: StephenM on April 09, 2023, 12:59:54 PM
I am starting my journey into the sampler jukebox from last year... that lead guitar is special...
the whole song rocks though
Title: Re: Another Story Another Day (80's pop rock)
Post by: SE on April 15, 2023, 06:31:32 PM
Yes loving  the eighties vibe, this suites you down to the ground.