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Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: thetworegs on October 15, 2022, 04:28:46 AM

Title: Time
Post by: thetworegs on October 15, 2022, 04:28:46 AM
Had a bit of time this morning so thought id write a song about it......Thanks for listening
The pink of the sky it fires up my mind
It wakes me up to realise the limit of time
Where I've watched my life turn into this pantomime
Where time is no longer on my side
Where time is no longer on my side

I come from nothing into something that rhymes
With the chords of life in these modern times
I find myself walking along the line
Where time is no longer on my side
Where time is no longer on my side

Time rushes like a storm cloud bringing rain
Time will rain rain and rain
The flood
fills life
Where  time is not on your side
Where time is no longer on your side
Time is not on your side
Title: Re: Time
Post by: BerryPatch on October 16, 2022, 06:41:47 PM
Glad to hear from you again Trevor! I dig the lofi sound of this recording. A touch of Iggy Pop in the vocals, the whole kind of reminds me of the more acoustic driven songs on Raw Power. Great words here as well.
Title: Re: Time
Post by: Ray Brookes on October 17, 2022, 03:05:32 AM
Love those acoustic guitars, Trev and the vocal is great as are the lyrics. I could picture this track as a soundtrack to a movie. Excellent atmosphere created.
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Post by: Geir on October 20, 2022, 05:01:54 AM
Nice one Trev!

Great sound in the acoustic guitars, and the words and the voice are excellent!
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Post by: chapperz66 on October 21, 2022, 10:56:46 AM
It's on nobody's side.  Great song Trev!

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Post by: Trist on October 22, 2022, 04:18:10 AM
Good song  enjoyed the low fi sound and the catchy hook, and lyrics and the way in which it is sung, liked the purity and theme . would be interesting to hear this one with a band as well
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