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Title: I want to be free
Post by: thetworegs on August 22, 2022, 02:43:31 PM
Another rainy day so no gardening so an afternoon in the studio to compensate with the Texas tea Tele ..thanks for listening 
Some people want to laugh
While others just want  to cry
Some people want to live it large
while others just want to hide 

This world is some kind of a crazy place
Where love doesn't seem, to get a say
But  I don't want to live that way
I just want to be true to myself
I want to feel the love in the air
And be free

When the night time comes
And darkness starts to surround
You've got to be true to yourself
Cause There's no one else around
Don't start playing games being someone else
You've gotta to be true to yourself

You may think that every day same
Its funny but that's how it seems
But each days different to every one cause you don't know how they've been
You say hi how are you and they say fine
But you know deep down  inside they living a lie

This world is some kind of a crazy place
Where love doesn't seem to pay
But  I don't want to live that way
I want to be free


When the night time comes
And darkness starts to surround
You've got to be true to yourself
Cause There's no one else around
Don't start playing games being someone else
You've gotta to be true, true to yourself

You may think that every days the s  ame
Its funny that's how it seems
But each days different to every one
And you you don't know how they've been
You say hi how are you and they say fine
But you know deep down their just living a lie

This world is such a crazy place
Where love doesn't seem to pay
But  I don't want to live that way
I want to be free
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: Farrell Jackson on August 22, 2022, 04:23:38 PM
A cool song Regs! The chords and vocal fit like a glove. You've woven the lyrics tastefully into the chord progression. Nicely done.
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: StephenM on August 23, 2022, 10:24:43 AM
"I just want to be true to myself
I want to feel the love in the air
And be free"

this is a major goal of mine Trev... I find myself walking around in love with everyone and everything.  I don't want to be pissed off at a pissed off world.  I recognize there are problems....always has been and always will be...but for me... I just want to love and be loved and forget the rest...if action is needed to take it but to stay out of everyone's drama and just love and be loved...

the lyrics here really hit me in the cerebral cortex... right between the eyes... yes... love the swirly guitars...and your voice fits in the guitar pocket perfect...
super song Trev


Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on August 23, 2022, 10:48:10 AM
Hi Regs,
Lovely intro.
I love the guitar tracks.
Your vocals is excellent, and the message is truly outstanding.
Respect and understanding, and the ability to love!!!
Thanks for this song.
Rene
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: Zoltan on August 23, 2022, 02:57:56 PM
Great lyrics, and the feel you're able to build with this performance is so tangible!
Wonderful stuff!
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: TPB on August 24, 2022, 09:27:42 AM
Wow your guitar work is just smoking on this song love the chorus guitar intro vocal is top notch as your usual
Tim
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on August 24, 2022, 12:15:15 PM
Epic intro build. I'm getting the Jim Steinmann/ meatloaf feel to this again. Great vocals and lyrics as always.
I like the effect on the guitars. Great performance.
Darren
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: Ray Brookes on August 24, 2022, 02:56:51 PM
Cool song, Trev and as always great vocal. I like that effect on the guitars too and the long intro builds the song perfectly.
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: godinqc on August 25, 2022, 11:31:05 AM
Great song, really good guitar work and vocals..
Great work
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: SE on September 04, 2022, 06:15:24 PM
This is cool, great guitar and vocal really enjoyed it!!
Title: Re: I want to be free
Post by: Johnbee on September 05, 2022, 06:52:07 AM
Love the guitar work, but IMHO the effect is a bit overdone.  Over all the song is great, especially when you get to the "I want to be free" line.

 :) John B