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Title: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: SE on April 20, 2022, 04:18:44 PM
I had a garageband track that had come to a dead end.
So who would you like to have a go at finishing it, send it to Greeny.
Well that's what I did, well am I happy very much so, hope  you enjoy  it!!

Far below me
Is the black still water
My wasted youth
Like broken bones in the sun

Spining spiral plates of vertigo
But from up here I can see the whole world

High diving from the tower of love x2

Gravity can be
Such a cruel mistress
And the demons stood behind me
Laugh at my distress

Spining spiral plates of vertigo
But from up here I can see the whole world

High driving from the tower of loveHigh Diving_SE and Greeny.MP3
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: launched on April 20, 2022, 08:16:00 PM
This is badass I love it! The "High Diving" lyric with that riff is right up my ally, so cool.
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: hardlock on April 21, 2022, 02:11:02 AM
Rock on! Nice mover, great drum programming! (? - actually, I don't know how garageband works). 8)
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: StephenM on April 21, 2022, 05:46:39 AM
really love the guitar sound on here... a bit different than I have heard from either of you!   It's a bit like Trevor Rabin used on Yes' 90210 album... I really dig that.
cool lyrics and singing....

when a monster teams up with another monster we get a two headed monster! 
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 21, 2022, 11:58:20 AM
Oh yeah, this song sort of grabs you by the throat and doesn't let go. Great lyrics and great vocals. A traditional sounding guitar riff yet the overall sound is contemporary. Excellent collab, guys.
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: chapperz66 on April 21, 2022, 01:21:16 PM
This is dead good.  Maybe a little light on bass but that's just me being picky.

Cool song.

Paul
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: tonyc on April 21, 2022, 01:27:54 PM
great collab brill lyrics and vocals great listen ....cheers tony cee
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 21, 2022, 08:18:08 PM
I love the beat.
You guys did well on this collab.
Nice work.
Rene
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: BerryPatch on April 22, 2022, 07:25:43 AM
Great rocking track! That guitar riff is delectable and the vocals are wonderful (love the harmonies!)
Great full sound and I love the hints of Bowie in the lyrics.
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Hook on April 24, 2022, 03:59:32 PM
Very cool rocker. High energy track with some expert vocals/lyrics.
Rock on!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Redler on April 26, 2022, 12:12:21 AM
Killer riffs and excellent lyrics!

This rocks!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: kenny mac on April 28, 2022, 12:24:57 AM
Great collab guys, its a rocker.
Its great when this happens, and works.
Bravo chaps.
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 28, 2022, 08:05:05 AM
I like that crunchy guitar rhythm with the lead riffing filling it in. Cool vocals Greeny and guitar SE!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: cuthbert on April 29, 2022, 12:08:48 AM
Love the raw guitars and punchy drums with Greeny's vocals. Tons of energy, and a top-notch collab.

Well done, gents!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Flash Harry on April 30, 2022, 02:53:57 PM
right up my street, something I could have seen at sweaty crowded student gigs, it feels very post punk and I love it.
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: SE on September 14, 2022, 04:13:44 PM
Just back for another listen, Greeny done the business!!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: SE on August 18, 2023, 05:46:31 PM
Yes, going to give it more bass!!
Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Blooby on August 24, 2023, 07:46:47 AM

Great track, gentlemen. That main riff is infectious, and that guitar figure during the "spiral" lyric is perfect. Cool beans.

Blooby

Title: Re: High Diving Greeny & SE
Post by: Trist on August 25, 2023, 05:04:49 AM
Cool lyrics and catchy chorus, would be a good song to do live loud and rocking, nice work guys
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