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Title: Morning Light
Post by: TPB on April 13, 2022, 06:55:37 PM
Ok maybe we had to much coffee
4 Guitars Rhythm 2 tracks Tim Two tracks Steve
3 drums One track Tim 2 Steve
2 Bass Tim and Steve
keyboard Steve
Vocals tim
Jackie is on the corner selling five and dimes now
He knows he is not living right just trying to live his life

CH
Help me make it through the night
Help me see the morning light

Young man in a foreign land fighting a foreign war
He is tired lonely scared and he wants to go home
CH

Young girl stares out the window watching couples walk on by
Wondering to herself when, when it will be her time
CH

Junkie on the corner asking me for a dollar bill
Tells me he needs it now just to keep from getting ill
CH

Young boy goes to a party he is there with all his friends
Looks around the room now but he feels alone again

Some went to work and others stayed home
Everybody trying to get on by just trying to get along
Thanks Steve had fun
Timmorning light.mp3
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Nelson on April 13, 2022, 08:37:12 PM
 This is one wild cut. Wish you had the lyrics up.
Man there's a lot going on and it's all smokin. You did an outstanding job mixing this.
The guitars, the drums, the bass, and those sick vocals. I had to listen a few times to make out the keyboard parts but I found them, must be these old ears.

Man, I just love this old school groove.
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 13, 2022, 08:43:01 PM
Really cool groove here; great rock track and the vocal is stellar. Well produced too, Tim. Great job; well done.
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: hardlock on April 14, 2022, 12:36:40 AM
Rockin' jam guys - great collab. Love the live vibe you have going! 8)
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Zoltan on April 14, 2022, 04:04:29 AM
The only time when you can really say you've had too much coffee is you're spending all the time sitting on the bog, and the guitar cable is too short to take the guitar with you...

Other than that. It's all smooth sailing and the more the merrier ;)

Those vocals are great. I like the grit, character and passion. The playing is lively and the tinkling of the ivories is quirky and fun. The song rolls like a moose and makes for an enjoyable ride on this otherwise grey day.

Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: StephenM on April 14, 2022, 05:08:38 AM
one night I was getting ready to go to bed and then this came in on an email... I gave it a listen... a couple hours later I was still jamming to this...
Tim gets such an incredible groove going it's really hard to resist.  I had the most fun on the bass, and the drums, and a little keyboard thingy...oh yeah, a little lead git fid
thanks Tim for letting me on this
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: TPB on April 14, 2022, 05:32:29 AM
Put the lyrics up
Tim
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Hook on April 14, 2022, 08:06:10 AM
Rockin groove you guys got going on. Your getting those drums down nicely brother!
Rock on!
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Redler on April 14, 2022, 11:38:52 PM
This has a killer groove! Dynamic recording and it has a warm live vibe to my ear, although it's not.

Brilliant job by both of you!
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on April 18, 2022, 05:38:51 AM
Really great sound and song guys. Love the music and vocals. Nice production and lyrics.
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Greeny on April 19, 2022, 03:28:44 AM
Nice swagger and groove. There's a cool late 60's psych sound to that lead guitar. Great performances and production - very fine work!
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Ella on April 20, 2022, 01:23:39 PM
Very cool indeed. Very nice vocals.
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 21, 2022, 08:20:14 PM
I love the guitar solo right from the gig.
The vocals are great!!!
Coffee is great!!!
Nice recording and production.
Rene
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 28, 2022, 08:23:27 AM
I'm a little late to the party on this one but I'm glad I found it. This is a great collab Tim and Steve! Tim this vocal style fits you and the song like a glove! Some fine guitar and keys work fellas. There are no holes in this song at all....I love it all!
Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: Pete C on April 28, 2022, 12:57:31 PM
Another one late to the pary ! Cracking collab, great vocals, guitars drums.keys ..the whole lot rocks !

Pete

Title: Re: Morning Light
Post by: BerryPatch on April 28, 2022, 09:44:52 PM
Great playing all around from the both of you. I love the off the charts guitar work from Steve and your soulful vocals and world weary lyrics are excellent Tim. Great job!