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Title: The Third Man
Post by: Nelly 20 on August 08, 2021, 11:33:56 PM

Hi,

I like to share my song " The Third Man" With you. I wrote the lyrics, Hope you like it .. Thanks

https://open.spotify.com/album/1RuzrboAwp0lZi3BbXH7dE

https://audiomack.com/c-m-pricelivecouk/song/14286643

https://music.youtube.com/playlist?list=OLAK5uy_luORpwaPm_RKsaAL8wO3-Tkohc4AqYQX4

The Third Man
Lyrics by Nelly Tharwat, Music by Chris Price ©2021 All Rights Reserved.
performer : Chris Price

She's a pretty girl and I love her so
I wanna know if she loves me too
She commented 'bout it laughin'
Beware not all dreams do come true

She is desired by a second man
His words are tender, he's a gentleman
To move me away and win her heart
He is ready to do all he can

I took heart and I told her
That I could bear anything but
Seeing the second man with her

She said, Neither of you is my love
That's what I want you to be certain of
In my life, there's a third man
So I'm lowering the curtain of love
Yes, I love the third man

Her sudden response astonished me
I was like a lost ship in a rough sea
The only woman that I love so
Unfortunately, she doesn't care for me

Her ironic comment was a sign
That she would never never be mine
And I was a fool when I thought
Our love would last a lifetime

I'm not her love I'm just a friend
My love was a nice dream and with
The first light all dreams had to end

She said; Neither of you is my love
That's what I want you to be certain of
In my life, there's a third man
So I'm lowering the curtain, love
Yes, I love the third man

She is desired by a second man
His words are tender, he's a gentleman
To move me away and win her heart
He is ready to do all he can

I took heart and I told her
That I could bear anything but
Seeing the second man with her

She said; Neither of you is my love
That's what I want you to be certain of
In my life, there's a third man
So I'm lowering the curtain, love
Yes, I love the third man

She said; Neither of us was her love
She wanted me to be certain of
In her life, there was a third man
So she lowered the curtain, love
I lowered the curtain, love
Title: Re: The Third Man
Post by: Nelly 20 on August 10, 2021, 12:13:37 AM

I hope to receive some comments on the lyrics..
Title: Re: The Third Man
Post by: StephenM on August 10, 2021, 03:56:05 AM
cool that you found a great partner to sing and play your great lyrics...that is excellent....

this sounds really nice...almost Southern Rock...or very 70's which is one of my favorite era's of music... this guy is a good really good musician...would like to know a bit more about the musician and you as well...

great post...and killer lead guitar work there too....
Title: Re: The Third Man
Post by: Nelly 20 on August 11, 2021, 12:33:44 AM
Hi Stephen,
Thank you for your input,  Chris Price is really a great Singer, Guitarist/Bass Player
and Songwriter.. Now,  we're working on a new song to submit it to a songwriting contest.

You can find more about us here:

https://www.facebook.com/chris.price.77770
website: https://5ded45f1cd13e.site123.me/
https://soundcloud.com/chris-price-824458122
https://audiomack.com/c-m-pricelivecouk/song/14276756
https://twitter.com/mates_band
https://soundcloud.com/user-202146195

Appreciate your input ..Thanks