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Title: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: thetworegs on May 07, 2021, 04:30:33 PM
I started this one with a bash on the 12 string and it turned into a song.....thanks for listening
Has the fire, really gone out now
As the daylight comes our bodies begin to ache
Did last night really happen

Now let the sunshine take all our worries away
return the blue back  from the grey

Tomorrow is now here today
Its time to let the pain fade away
Close our eyes to yesterday

And  let the sunshine take all our worries away
return the blue back  from the grey

The words spun from my mind in anger
The emotion flooded my voice from my vein
The truth burned my tongue as it spat out at you 

Now let the sunshine take all our worries away
return the blue back  from the grey

Can we save the embers from the fire
They glow as they cling to life
We have one more chance to relight the fire

And let the sunshine take all our worries away
return the blue back from the grey

You got to let it go
You gotta let it  ride
You gotta put the hurt, away
You got to let it go
You got to let  ride
You gotta put that hurt away
To let the sunshine
To let the sunshine
To let the sunshine take it all away

Lets try to re-light the fire
Lets let our minds  turn to the light
Lets relight those feelings
let the sunshine take all our worries away
return the blue back  from the grey
 
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: Bluesberry on May 09, 2021, 07:25:17 PM
Gret song...love the vocal melody...its got  real classic rock kind of sound....great songwriting Reg-o-man
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: Ferryman on May 10, 2021, 04:22:12 AM
Loving the 12 string on this one. Great playing and lovely chord sequences. A stellar vocal as always makes this another great listen. I love the way you use the stereo image on your recordings. They arrangements are simple but they sound fab on my monitors. It's a real winning formula you have created here.
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: TPB on May 10, 2021, 05:45:20 AM
Great playing love the vocal treatment on this song Radio ready and a great melody
Tim
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: Geir on May 10, 2021, 06:59:03 AM
WOW    what a voice !

Great song and I just love your vocals !!
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: Redler on May 10, 2021, 07:06:45 AM
Very powerful and impressive! Your 12 string sounds like a dream and the tempo change at 3:15 works fine. Top class man and guitar track.
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: launched on January 23, 2024, 08:56:39 PM
I have no idea why this didn't have 100 comments, glad I found it because it's friggin' fantastic!

Had a shitty day today, now it's good again!
Title: Re: Has the fire really gone out
Post by: Pru on January 25, 2024, 11:02:40 AM
top song. your voice is amazing and that 12 string guitar sounds terrific