Title: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Hook on December 11, 2019, 08:00:37 AM
Post by: Hook on December 11, 2019, 08:00:37 AM
Wrote & recorded this over the last few days. It's about Global Warming and our relationship with the Earth.
Baritone uke & vocal along with the Baritone Uke solo were done in the car. Drums are DrumJam, the atmospheric sounds are TC Performer app & the bass is my U-Bass.
1 Baritone Uke/vocal (stereo)
1 Baritione Uke solo (stereo)
1 TC performer (stereo)
1 U-bass
3 drums (all stereo)
Crumbling Inside
written & performed by Hook
Crumbling inside I keep standing
Knowing whats expected of me
Responsibilities never cease
And sadness only seems to increase
My Emotions teeter unpredictably
Anger melting into tears
So little to look forward to
Sadness In the coming years
made our choices
And put our path in motion
Destroyed the very thing
That nurtures everyone
Knowing whats expected of me
Responsibilities never cease
And sadness only seems to increase
My Emotions teeter unpredictably
Anger melting into tears
So little to look forward to
Sadness In the coming years
made our choices
And put our path in motion
Destroyed the very thing
That nurtures everyone
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Ferryman on December 12, 2019, 06:40:08 AM
Post by: Ferryman on December 12, 2019, 06:40:08 AM
Nice one Hook, very atmospheric. I like the added sounds and the uke solo is very nice. A thoughtful piece.
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Redler on December 12, 2019, 12:10:23 PM
Post by: Redler on December 12, 2019, 12:10:23 PM
Pieceful and atmospheric. This has a bit NordicMET vibe, imo...
Solo uke sounds almost sitar :)
Nice work!
Solo uke sounds almost sitar :)
Nice work!
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Mike_S on December 18, 2019, 08:52:11 AM
Post by: Mike_S on December 18, 2019, 08:52:11 AM
Lovely Hook. I love the lyrics and also the overall feel of the piece. Really thought provoking. Those strange little noises you added just add some extra uneasiness to the atmosphere, but work so well with the piece.
Mike
Mike
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: T.C. Elliott on December 30, 2019, 12:34:41 PM
Post by: T.C. Elliott on December 30, 2019, 12:34:41 PM
Man, that bass line is so good. I know it's not the highlight of the song, but a couple of places it just felt right. I like the picking and the melody. This is an easy one to listen to.
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Mike Huntingford on December 30, 2019, 12:52:01 PM
Post by: Mike Huntingford on December 30, 2019, 12:52:01 PM
Sad yet also inspirational. You did what in your car?
Nice stuff!!
Mike
Nice stuff!!
Mike
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: kenny mac on December 31, 2019, 09:47:35 AM
Post by: kenny mac on December 31, 2019, 09:47:35 AM
Very atmospheric, that TC performer filters through your ears like an eery wind.
The solo is fab.
A great piece of work bro.
Atmospheric on.
The solo is fab.
A great piece of work bro.
Atmospheric on.
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: dobrodaddy on January 07, 2020, 12:48:20 AM
Post by: dobrodaddy on January 07, 2020, 12:48:20 AM
Delicate yet soulful. Nicely done! I agree the lead was outstanding. Liked the atmospherics as well. Thoughtful lyrics and a great way to tag it at the end. Very cool.
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 07, 2020, 08:18:46 AM
Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 07, 2020, 08:18:46 AM
A sad but gentle song Hook. It made me listen intently. Everything works well here brother.
Farrell
Farrell
Title: Re: "Crumbling Inside" a Hook original for DisasterFest
Post by: chapperz66 on January 07, 2020, 08:21:01 AM
Post by: chapperz66 on January 07, 2020, 08:21:01 AM
Beautiful song, Hook. Disturbing, but beautiful. The lead uke lines are magnificent.
Paul
Paul