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Title: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on March 01, 2018, 10:11:07 AM
Hi all, still too cold to go outside soooo,  hope you enjoy.    Willie


Read the letter you wrote me
On the table next to your keys
Said I'll call you when I'm able
I'm not sure when that will be

So carry me home tonight
Yeah carry me home tonight

She wrote are we still friends
I hate to end it this way
But Jim Beam is no friend of mine
He was always in the way

So carry me home tonight
So carry me home tonight

Too many lonely nights
Alone in my bed
Too many barroom fights
She said

Guess I'll hit the bars tonight
Just me and my friend Jim
And when Jim goes home I'll be all alone
So who will let me in

So carry me home tonight
Yeah carry me home tonight

So carry me home tonight
Yeah carry me home tonight
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: kenny mac on March 01, 2018, 02:03:04 PM
Excellent guitar sound mate, brilliant lyrics as well.
Great story line.
well done.
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: Mach on March 01, 2018, 02:36:20 PM
Beautifully done Willie. Such a great song and sound.
You whip out these tunes so quick.
Well done.

Mach
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: Groundy on March 01, 2018, 11:16:03 PM
You are a songwriting machine, Willie,
Great sounding guitar work,
And such a great storyline.
Well done...


Alex.
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: thetworegs on March 02, 2018, 08:01:06 AM
Good one Willie a great lyric
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: Bluesberry on March 02, 2018, 09:18:52 AM
Its a classic, nice song
Title: Re: Carry me Home Tonight
Post by: Redler on March 02, 2018, 12:48:56 PM
Fine ballad, superb harmonies! Excellent job, Willie!