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Title: Climbing those walls
Post by: thetworegs on August 01, 2017, 03:56:39 PM
Gutar and vocal recorded seperatly ....don't drink cofee before trying to sleep in a hot hotel room it will make you climb those walls.....
YOUR THOUGHTFUL IN  DARKNESS
AS YOUR THOUGHTS STAINED THE DARK SKY
A TRUTH THAT NO ONES KNOWS, BUT YOU
BURNS AT YOUR NNER EYE
MELTED TIME, BECOMES NOTHING AT ALL
AS YOU START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS
AS YOU START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS    
YEAH, YOU START TO CLIMB THE WALLS

THE QUESTIONS BEEN  ANSWERED,
BUT IT BECOMES PART OF A LIE
YOU TELL YOURSELF, YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY
MELTED TIME, BECOMES NOTHING AT ALL
AS YOU START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS
AS YOU START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS

YOU LOOK IN YOUR MINDS EYE
TO FIND A KINDA RUTH
AND IT LAYS THERE BOLD AS BRASS
IT TELLS YOU WHY, YOUR THE FOOL
THAT MELTED TIME WILL MAKE YOU NOTHING AT ALL
WHEN YOUR NOTHING, AND YOUR CLIMBING  THOSE WALLS
WHEN YOUR NOTHING, AND YOUR CLIMBING  THOSE WALLS

IF YOU LOOK INSIDE YOU'LL FIND ALL THOSE ANSWERS WHY
PLEASE LISTEN TO THAT TRUTH AND DON'T JUST SIT THERE LIKE A CHILD  AND CRY
TAKE NOTICE, DO SOMETHING , ANYTHING TO CHANGE

CAUSE  YOUR GONNA START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS
AND YOU DON'T WANNA START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS


YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU WANT OR WHO YOU ARE

YOU TELL YOURSELF ITS NO YOU IT'S SOMEONE ELSE TO BLAME

DAY TO DAY LIVING  HERE IN THE DARK
YOUR THOUGHTFUL IN DARKNESS AS YOUR THOUGHTS STAIN THE SKY
A TRUTH THAT NO ONES KNOWS BUT YOU,
 BURNS AT YOUR INNER EYE
MELTED TIME, BECOMES NOTHING AT ALL
AS YOU START TO CLIMB THOSE WALLS
YOU CAN'T ESCAPE
YOU KNOW WHY
YOUR INNER SELF TELLS YOU
YOU LIED
JUST WANT THE TRUTH
IT WILL MAKE YOU BURN IN HELL
YOU CANT ESCAPE
YOUR GOING TO HELL


Climbing those walls
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Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Groundy on August 01, 2017, 10:52:45 PM
Nice one Trev, Great vox as always,
Nice clean guitar sound,
Top class my friend.....


Alex
Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Redler on August 02, 2017, 10:45:48 PM
Your voice is  great as always! The interpretation is really good; I  loved the nuances "silent" and powerful!

Well done!



Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Mach on August 03, 2017, 05:18:26 AM
Dark and mysterious. This would fit great in a thriller movie
I like it! Well done Trev.

Mach
Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Hook on August 03, 2017, 06:26:46 AM
Love it brother.
Rock on!
Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Jarle on August 07, 2017, 07:23:48 AM
Like Mach said:
Dark and mysterious.
Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: StephenM on January 27, 2021, 07:47:59 PM
To me this is another level .... a mountain top of brilliance.... like a star shining forth, the brightest in a vast sky of stars...they all are beautiful but this one is just brighter and special....
whatever the motivation was Trevor I love this one...it's big vocally, lyrically, and the music fits perfect....  a sequel with a kind of Pink Floyd drum, bass, keys, and lead to add to it would be icing on the cake....
Title: Re: Climbing those walls
Post by: Ferryman on January 28, 2021, 02:32:07 AM
Missed this first time round, so gave it a listen. And I'm glad I did, it's superb. Great performance, stunning vocals and a great lyrical theme.

Trev, I hope you're feeling better and not climbing the walls.