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Title: new choon
Post by: Super 8 on June 30, 2017, 08:21:38 AM
Here's a brand new wan from me. It took me 10 mins in total to write making it THE fastest song I've written in my songwriting 'career' (LOL!) to date! Not really sure what I think of it to be completely honest ...
Title: Re: 'Shooting From The Hip' - a new SUPER 8 choon
Post by: Flash Harry on June 30, 2017, 08:28:10 AM
Rather excellent. It has a relaxed feel, nice open mix with loads of space in there. Great melody and pace.

I like it a lot! 
Title: Re: 'Shooting From The Hip' - a new SUPER 8 choon
Post by: Super 8 on June 30, 2017, 08:42:17 AM
Cheers Flash! I think I'm going to have to go back in & bring that bass up in the mix though as there's a definite bass melody groove in there that's not cutting through as things currently stand. Leave it with me ... ;-) 
Title: Re: 'Shooting From The Hip' - a new SUPER 8 choon
Post by: Flash Harry on June 30, 2017, 08:46:10 AM
#boskoschwartzitis.

It's a verifiable disease.
Title: Re: 'Shooting From The Hip' - a new SUPER 8 choon
Post by: Super 8 on June 30, 2017, 09:41:36 AM
Quote from: Flash Harry on June 30, 2017, 08:46:10 AM#boskoschwartzitis.

It's a verifiable disease.
LOL! Seriously though, there's a bass riff in there that's just not cutting through as things stand. I'm on it!
Title: Re: 'Shooting From The Hip' - a new SUPER 8 choon
Post by: Groundy on June 30, 2017, 12:26:15 PM
I really enjoyed this, and could have swore I had commented, old age aye'..
Well done.....Alex